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Crusher0508 β€” What Dreams are made of
Published: 2004-05-04 20:32:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description What Dreams Are Made Of

It is night, go to sleep
And dream of places only
Your imagination can create.
See creatures run through the infinite
Space of your imagination
When you’re near the ocean
Breathe a deep breath and smell
What your mind wants you to smell,
Or listen to what your mind
Wants the waves to sound like.
That is what dreams are made of.
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Comments: 5

Kaetar [2004-05-04 20:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmmm *listens to the way the waves sounds, just as he wants them to* thank you for that refreshing poem.

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Crusher0508 In reply to Kaetar [2004-05-04 21:31:15 +0000 UTC]

I guess all I can say is your welcome

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Naebliss [2004-05-04 20:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... for an english project thats pretty nice. Work on it some, and re-post it. It has a lot of potential ^_^

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Naebliss In reply to Naebliss [2004-05-04 21:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... read it everyday, spend about 5 minutes thinking about what you could do to change it, to make it better, to add more details, but dont get frustrated. Do this until you like the way it looks ALOT... til you can't believe YOU made it

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Crusher0508 In reply to Naebliss [2004-05-04 21:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

but could you give me acouple of Ideas

I think I'm a little poetically impaired I can't make nearly as good of poems that my friends make but I'm still happy with them

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