Comments: 14
superhero-gerbil [2013-02-13 16:29:45 +0000 UTC]
Awesome stuff, mate.
Even though it's for a contest, I would love to see more of her.
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CrypticManifestation In reply to superhero-gerbil [2013-02-15 23:31:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I might do that soon, I have a lot of sketches I have done of her but havent inked or colored any yet.
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CrypticManifestation In reply to TheDM1 [2012-11-12 13:54:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Drawing this was a very interesting experience, maybe Ill draw this character again the future.
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CrypticManifestation In reply to tamiiland [2012-09-27 22:24:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you!, hopefully there will be more who share your sentiment, although Ill be happy if it just does well in the contest, there is some tough competition out there.
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Ysabetwordsmith [2012-09-17 17:27:14 +0000 UTC]
Excellent comic book cover, particularly the color against grayscale. Charming body type with the very rounded curves on breasts, belly, and legs plus the soft round face.
As for the pose, people have differing levels of flexibility. I can twist that far back, give or take.
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kuramay [2012-09-17 12:35:20 +0000 UTC]
That is some badass shading going on there! Love the style. It have a noir feel!
I absolutely love your shading on her body. That feels like some solid fat! You really got the weight of her properly.
Looks like a real comic cover too.
If you want one critique... I wouldn't put the gradient and emboss on the title. Two reasons:
1. It's kinda industry standard not to actually use emboss in proper graphic design or official covers. So using it kinda look unprofessional. (Then again, we're here to subvert industry standards, so screw that.)
2. Your image itself have a lot of high contrast and solid shades. The gradient and emboss kinda takes away from it. You also got a breaking thing on the font, but the emboss soften edges. It almost made it look like smooth glass, together with the gradient. This doesn't feel as strong as solid red text.
If you're worried about legibility, then I think you could do a thick black outline around the text. But looking at that area I think that's not even necessary.
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CrypticManifestation In reply to kuramay [2012-09-17 15:32:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Ill admit I was worried my shading style wouldnt look comic enough, I glad you liked it. And you are definitely right about the embossed title, I hadnt noticed how much it took away from the image, I definitely have lot to learn about lettering, I think letterers are unsung heroes in the comic industry. I am gonna try and work on the tittle a little bit and update it after the voting is done. Your feedback is much appreciated.
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kuramay In reply to CrypticManifestation [2012-09-18 02:08:40 +0000 UTC]
Glad that helped!
I'm going into graphic design, so I'm a bit more sensitive in this area than actual drawing hahahaha...
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Sorephene [2012-09-17 06:31:44 +0000 UTC]
I loooove her!!! She is really really cute!
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CrypticManifestation In reply to Sorephene [2012-09-17 15:28:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! One of the main things I was shooting for when I was brainstorming her is that I wanted a badass adorkable super heroine.
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RobynRose [2012-09-15 23:10:49 +0000 UTC]
entry recieved!
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