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Syito306 [2012-04-23 19:59:03 +0000 UTC]
Darn,wrong avatar.I used to have a licking Mew.......Sorry..................
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Syito306 [2012-04-23 19:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Nice!Awesome!Licky!Lick!
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aluckystar [2011-11-23 20:02:50 +0000 UTC]
its an interesting account of what could have happened. part of the main character's victory was that N got more empathetic toward humans. that he did not try to force them into his beliefs. if White had lost this might have changed. If there is one thing i wonder about it is "what would have happened in other regions. Would N have tried to take them over too?"
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CountessWaffle [2011-11-15 22:34:44 +0000 UTC]
This is really good so far! The fact that it takes someone who doesn't even like this pairing to actually get one with plot is kind of sad... =_="
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to CountessWaffle [2011-11-15 23:36:01 +0000 UTC]
I really wouldn't say this story has a "Plot" in the traditional sense, but there is more to it than White thinking about N every second of everyday (I'm reading a story like that, just so I can fairly say that it's tripe). But yeah, the fact that I, someone who dislikes the pairing, can write it better than the fans.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to CountessWaffle [2011-11-19 00:00:56 +0000 UTC]
Now now there are a few good ones out there, you just have to sift through the bad ones. Might I suggest "Alphabet Soup" and "Eden?"
I know! That's what's fun about having a blank slate for a character; you can give her whatever personality you want! The problem is that there no no actual girl on the face of the earth who is so easily swayed and manipulated to the point that she would give up her entire life just to get some moderately attractive man in her pants.
Depth is one of FetishWheelShipper's moral enemies, don'cha know? Who needs depth when you can have make out scenes out of no where with Katy Perry lyrics thrown in for shits and gigs?
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elliexero [2011-10-23 17:43:26 +0000 UTC]
TWO SHAIMINS????
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Misogi-chan [2011-10-19 02:19:57 +0000 UTC]
is bootiful. I love the way how you included the pokemon talking and interacting with other characters. And how N is portrayed. This is just perfect.
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okamispiderbrush [2011-10-18 19:24:13 +0000 UTC]
This was a good read.
Really, I do think that if N forced White to marry him, she would become sad and incredibly angry, being taken away from the people she loves and not being able to leave the castle--and everyone's Pokemon having to be released. She certainly wouldn't all of a sudden be supper happy about it--after all, that was part of her journey, was it not? To stop N's plans about separating humans and Pokemon?
(You said this will be continuing, right? I'm just going to make a guess here and think that the end will also be similar to how Inbound Train: Sorrow ended?)
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to okamispiderbrush [2011-10-18 22:55:56 +0000 UTC]
Exactly! No sane girl would just accept being forced into marriage- let alone when they're only about sixteen. But does White Swan care about that, or that everyone will be forced to release their Pokemon. NOPE all that matters to her is that "Holy Miltanks! I'm marrying the super amazing hot sexy hot beautiful N! I'm the luckiest girl ever!"
Inadvertently, it did become White's duty to try and stop N, but more than that it was about being a Trainer.
(Yes it will. And since this is a continuation of Sorrow, it will end the same way. I've already planned an ending, spoilers: Ghetsis is a bastard.)
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SapphiraTheMongoose [2011-10-18 12:09:43 +0000 UTC]
Even though girls crushing on N of all anime characters makes me laugh, this was really well done.
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linkgirl11 [2011-10-18 10:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Did you get permission from the artist to use this picture?
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to Cherikkou14 [2011-10-18 11:46:14 +0000 UTC]
I'm mostly a ExpressShipping girl m'self. But hey, if the majority of fans won't write a realistic relationship between these two, than someone has to.
You pretty much hit it on the head right there. And you can't forget about how everyone and their mothers (really, there was a fic where even White's mother thought N was a hot piece of ass) think N is the most beautiful person to grace the planet.
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aluckystar In reply to Cherikkou14 [2011-11-23 20:06:11 +0000 UTC]
yaaay fellow twilight hater. and your right. the kawaii "perfect boy+perfect girl" stuff gets old.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to Cherikkou14 [2011-10-19 10:20:07 +0000 UTC]
Damn right they do, not that any of them notice it. They're all too busy being buried under the mushy praise and fantasizing about White and N sex.
Thank you! That's so awesome to hear >w<
Then you would hate 's fanfic Fill Me With Your Posion and 's comic; they both portray White as weak willed, and easily swayed by N. The former constantly talk about N and practically needs him every second of the day in order to breathe, and the latter is almost raped by N in the dream world and doesn't even care. YOU WANNA SEE WHAT I MEAN?
The comic page of oh-so-romantic sexual assault:[link]
In which the author proves she sees the couple as Edward and Bella: [link]
Click the links... IF YOU DARE.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to Cherikkou14 [2011-10-19 23:07:35 +0000 UTC]
Would you like some fluff to ease the pain?
That is what she looks like. White looks like she'd rather punch N in the mouth than kiss him, and if they did get into any relationship, tease him a little. In the comic she pretty much blushes whenever someone even mentions N and in the story she's like "Where my N? I need my N! I can't live without my N!I want my N here!" and "Oh my God, N's been poisoned! What do I do? What do I do? What do I- goodness gracious he still looks beautiful even when he's writhing in pain." Not kidding about that last one, by the way.
That's because he's not, dear friend. If you asked N if he knew what "rape" "sex" were, he'd probably think they were some kind of foreign brand of medicine or food or something.
I know =_= Why can't couples in stories be balanced and actually act like humans? I don't recall there being a literary law that said the girl has to be weak and submissive and the guy in control and strong. I mean with my version of White's main love interest, Nobori, they're on equal terms. They mutually respect one another, get annoyed by each other, and if they ever did have sex (only when White was above the age of eighteen of course. Most likely twnety-one or twenty-two) chances are White'd be able to top Nobori. Even though she's a full foot shorter than him.
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squiddlyn In reply to AshBee-Bree [2011-10-18 11:37:59 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you on that one.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to AshBee-Bree [2011-10-18 04:49:45 +0000 UTC]
It is kinda like a Beauty and the Beast love story if you think about it. Speaking as a girl who has been in relationships, the ones that you just dive head first into usually end badly.
for that comment you get one free internet that's basically what FWS is to most of the fangirls. To hell with development, they just want their fluff and sex. I'm serious, there are FWS fics where White and N have sex. Blegh.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to AshBee-Bree [2011-10-18 11:51:57 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. As for the age group... I would say that White's about sixteen and N's about twenty-one, of course there are fics that make White older or N younger so they can have all the sex they want without causing an uproar.
I may ship a questionable pairing, White and Nobori (sixteen and twenty five) but the pointless smut is at a minimum with those two.
I'm not trying to promote my OTP. No siree >.>; <.<;
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aluckystar In reply to CrystalLotus98 [2011-11-23 20:13:07 +0000 UTC]
dude, the main character in the series is like 10. always has been forever will be.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to aluckystar [2011-11-23 20:54:56 +0000 UTC]
Actually, the creator has said that the main characters for Black and White were over ten years old. So there goes your "always has been and forever will be" argument. The most popular age range for the Black/White leads in the fandom is 14-18. Not to be rude, but think before you make such a broad statement.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to aluckystar [2011-11-23 22:08:29 +0000 UTC]
No problem
Yeah, it is kind of off that Ash is still ten by this point... technically she should be in his twenties by now (as of logic exists in the Pokemon anime). I'm more of a Pokemon game fangirl than a Pokemon anime fangirl so, yeah.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to AshBee-Bree [2011-10-18 22:39:49 +0000 UTC]
That's the assumption, they certainly don't look ten.
I'LL HELP YOU 8DDD paste ノボ主♀ into Pixiv's searchbar.
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silverleaf02 [2011-10-18 02:41:46 +0000 UTC]
wow! i really like this. most fan fics of black and white i read dont even bother to put the pokemon in. its all N ans White this, N and Wite that. this is amasing work!
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to silverleaf02 [2011-10-18 02:55:10 +0000 UTC]
I know! Most writers for this pairing seem to forget that Pokemon are kind of the reason White and N met in the first place. No Pokemon, no "twu wuv." Not that they care about that, so long as they get their OOC fluff.
Anyway, thank you for the kind words. Hopefully my next chapters will be as enjoyable.
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silverleaf02 In reply to CrystalLotus98 [2011-10-18 19:20:06 +0000 UTC]
indeed, it drives me nuts when i want to read a fan fiction and every time its all about the shipping!! i know i didnt like N at all when i was playing black! anyway before i go off on a rant i just want to say that inm eagerly awaiting the next chapters!
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Yami-Shioko [2011-10-17 22:48:13 +0000 UTC]
I got curious and decided to read this. Granted, I'm not a very big fan of Pokemon and - now that I think about it - I kinda share N's views about not wanting Pokemon to battle (since I find it horribly cruel that they pit cute little creatures to the death against each other), but I find this really interesting (even though I know almost nothing about the Unova region).
I think you did a good job writing this. You really put a lot of emotion behind this. I don't think I've ever read a story that was about a pairing, but one person hated the other. That's really interesting, nice work. I really like it. And I really like your writing style, it's very descriptive.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to Yami-Shioko [2011-10-18 02:53:03 +0000 UTC]
it don't know why, but the fact that you read and liked a Pokemon fanfiction, despite not like the franchise very much, makes me super happy. I must be doing something right!
Thank you, the fact that you say that makes me happy (especially since I wrote posted this at six in the morning with no sleep). I hope you read and enjoy the future chapters!
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Yami-Shioko In reply to CrystalLotus98 [2011-10-18 03:00:37 +0000 UTC]
You must, then. Cause this was really good. The picture you also chose got me curious; I thought it was really cute. And, it fits the story - a lot.
Well, I can't wait to see them. I honestly would love to see how N tries to get White to trust him.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to Yami-Shioko [2011-10-18 04:52:07 +0000 UTC]
It is a cute picture, and one of the only not blatantly shippy ones I found on Pixiv. All the others were overly romantic. Hugging, kissing, cuddling- not at all fitting for this story.
It'll take a while; my version of White's as stubborn as mule.
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Yami-Shioko In reply to CrystalLotus98 [2011-10-18 09:32:44 +0000 UTC]
That's true. I mean, it looks like the pairing, but it's not....like normal pairing pictures where they're almost always making out or something *rolls eyes*
I can see that - and all the injuries she's caused (literally). But, I can see her point. I don't think I'd trust someone who caused me to turn against my friends and marry them - even if I didn't love them.
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CrystalLotus98 In reply to Yami-Shioko [2011-10-18 13:36:28 +0000 UTC]
A picture of White and N where they aren't making out is a rare gem indeed. Although it seems like I'm getting in trouble for it now...
Exactly. Any self-respecting girl would probably hit the one who basically took her life from her instead of just laying down and excepting it.
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