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Cthulhu-Calls — Thor Revisited
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Published: 2009-07-18 11:09:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 672; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 14
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Well, as promised, here is the actual scan of the Thor piece I did. I colored it in gray scale and then edited the caption boxes in Photo shop with Jin's help. this is also one of my first attempts at inking, Let me here your thoughts.Related content
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this was always an epic piece. this new version just builds on it.
there are a few thing though that hold it back though.
the layout. if panel 4 didnt exist and the text in it were at the bottom of panel 3 it would be fine, but, since it does exist it feels like it should be panel 2 and just move the other ones down. leaving the text box in their original positions.
panels two and three are my favorite and accenting the blood really lets it pop out at the reader. over all its a great piece especially for a first attempt.
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well I appreciate it, I am really striving to get good at the ink an color aspect. I feel theirs not a lot of people who really have that skill in the traditional sense anymore.
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Definitely a piece long-time comin' for the DA page dude. Glad to see those Copic pens worked out for ya!
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thanks, I slip on the cape in panel one but over all I am still pleased with it.
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its nicely done im horrible with storytelling though so im no judge
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but you are a critique and your opinion matters.
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