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Published: 2002-05-18 01:25:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 55
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Description lounging in the middle
of a wooden floor
in a wooden house
sits a wooden bowl
the room is bare
save for the singular peace
its contents threaten to spill over
and disrupt the simplistic harmony
present between nothingness and existence
the doorframe shilloutes a man
pondering the meaning of it all
with an intent smile
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Comments: 4

chronocore [2002-05-24 09:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Draws a very clear picture in my mind. Have you considered writing short stories? Seems you would be good at it

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hedda [2002-05-20 16:06:46 +0000 UTC]

I like the "singular peace" phrase...
great turn of words
and extremely zen too

the word "shilloutes" gave me pause tho, it didn't flow as well as the rest... maybe it's me....

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hikaru-kun [2002-05-20 16:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Actually, you succeded in creating that zen-like essence....IT's great!!!!
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Piranha: The next wave of emotional assasins.....

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whyrph [2002-05-18 02:24:03 +0000 UTC]

I like this. Good description of . . . wood. Nice imagery and stuff.

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