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Ayronstorkarynx [2018-02-20 07:33:03 +0000 UTC]
Howdey, I'm Linckey, Linckey the loud flower
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DaniOskar [2017-01-15 21:56:36 +0000 UTC]
Hmm. Not exactly, what I would've chosed on the 1st Place, but it is as well good as the official Cover of Undertale. By the Way, where did Lincoln putted his Bandage (That is, if he carried it from the Start of his Journey) undertale.wikia.com/wiki/Banda… ? A secret Message you say? (Several Minutes of Decoding later) Whew, it took me a little more De... Er, I mean Patience than expected to decipher that one.
IT'S EVEN HARDER THAN JUNIOR JUMBLE!
You know, both Toriel and Asgore use Fireball-related Attacks (Asriel does it as well: The Fireball Rain, which Toriel uses in her Battle, whenever she starts to lose the Will to fight), while both Sans and Papyrus use Bone-related Attacks. How does it come, that the Gaster Blaster is included, since you said, that there won't be any Genocide Run? Unless you intend to make a few References to the Genocide Route, like a Blueprint of Mettaton NEO, signalizing his Genocide Form being a Prototype, as for Sans using his Revenant Powers, I'm not sure, when it would occur. And besides, I doubt, that your Prologue would justify it in any Way. "Raw Deal" with an alternate Ending, in which Lincoln doesn't catch up with Vanzilla, on the other Hand, would trigger all that is needed to motivate for the Genocide Run: (Emotional) Pain, Devastation and Desire for Revenge for being "betrayed", after spending a long Time in the Wild far away from Civilization (It would have an Effect on his Body and Personality way different from "Roughin' It") and looking for Shelter from a Storm in a Cave from Mt. Ebott, while Lucy's Card Fortune "Lincoln's Day will end in Disaster"(It wasn't mentioned for who it would be a Disaster) became true (Much to Dismay of the other ones) and...
Er, I think, that I talked already enough about the Genocide Run. Let's talk instead about Chpt 4 "Napstablook the depressive Ghost", like, when will it be ready?
(That Human has maybe strange Themes to talk about, but he has his Heart in the right Place)
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DaniOskar In reply to Cupcakes1224 [2017-01-16 07:36:56 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see. I was also surprised, when I realized, that you are a FNAF Fan. I would have personally expected on the last Place a young Girl to be a Fan of a "Chuck E. Cheese Creepypasta" Lookalike (You know, mostly because of the R-rated "Blood and Gore" Parts). When it came out on the Beginning, I had Trouble to fall asleep and layed awake thinking that those Animatronics might get me. That was in the Time of 2014-2015. Despite seeming to be less fearsome ever since to me, they still make me flinch (just like Lucy does, by showing up out of Nowhere). Anyway, I take it, that Chpt 4 might be ready the earliest before Easter. Another good Idea perhaps would be a Running Gag (The Series has many Running Gags, for Instance Lincoln's ridiculously long Operation Names), in which Flowey would on Occasion call Lincoln Chara, convinced, that Lincoln is Chara's Deckname, while Chara would look just like Lincoln (or Linka, if you intend to make Chara female) followed by Lincoln saying in an annoyed Way, that his Name is not Chara.
Also, your welcome. The Title is clearly based off from "Casper the friendly Ghost".
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Cupcakes1224 In reply to DaniOskar [2017-01-16 21:03:53 +0000 UTC]
I am a huge Fnaf Fan. The way I discovered Fnaf is watching animation of it on 'ihascupquake' channel. Later on I got into the fanfictions and my first crush on it was Foxy and then Freddy, Bonnie, Golden Freddy, Marionette, and finally on the Crying Child.
I wrote a Fanfiction about Fnaf that I have on Quotev.
( Fnaf Fanfiction )
You can read it if you want to, but it kind of like only for girls and there might be a few mistakes because this was the first Fanfiction I even made online.
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With school and basically working on my own personal Fanfiction that might be long enough time to finish chapter 4 and probably add a little bonus to it like I did to chapter 3.
I am also working on an Undertale Parent Scenarios on Quotev, but I can't anymore because IT KEEPS FREAKING SCROLLING DOWN!!!
I'm gonna add my Undertale Parents Scenrios here, but I can't copy and paste because of it scrolling down. So, I have to go to home screen to go to my Notes where I write stuff to make sure there are no mistakes and back on Safari to read the word and type it back. That's gonna take a long time to do. Heck I am not evening finished with copying chapter 1!
Might add that running gag with the long names because it's part of Lincoln's personality.
Flowey would called Lincoln Chara whenever he pops up of the dirt. He may call him the male and idiot version of Chara because Flowey is a big jerk.
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DaniOskar In reply to Cupcakes1224 [2017-01-21 23:55:10 +0000 UTC]
Well, I learned about FNAF, when my wacky Baby Bro. watched Markiplier's Playthroughs. www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOztns…
If I would've been on the Place of the Night Guard, I would've acted differenty than just hide like a wimpy Coward inside an defective "Bombenbunker" :
)Putting on an Armor and patrolling at the Restaurant's Entrance like a traditional Guardsman from the Middle Ages www.youtube.com/watch?v=esJr1w…
)Hire Officer X as Assistance/Substitute, which would surely give those Animatronic a worse Time than Sans could wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images… www.youtube.com/watch?v=i4_xNI… watchcartoonsonline.eu/watch/t… (02:40)
)Bolting them to the Wall with a Chain long enough to give them enough Freedom to move, but at the same Time short enough to prevent them to enter the Office. Here a Demonstration:
youtu.be/0a6rKT4YzK4?t=1m15s
"Hey, Freddy! Would you look at that?"
"Well, I think I think I might. I'll just pick myself up and... (pulling against his Chain)"
"Oh what's this... heavens look..."
"I'M BOLTED TO THE WALL!!!!!!!!!!!" www.youtube.com/watch?v=UHlnCz…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=3dm2lB… www.youtube.com/watch?v=woPff-…
(End of the Demonstration)
)Lock myself inside a Wardrobe/Closet and leave a Dummy as a Sustitute. www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3epEV…
In Case for Education (Because of the Mistakes) about the Game's Lore, visit Matpat from Game Theory www.youtube.com/watch?v=th_LYe…
or Gaijin Goomba from Game Exchange www.youtube.com/watch?v=YGF9KW…
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Since you said, that you are an easygoing Lass (my goal is to finish one chapter of the story every weekend even though I'm mostly lazy), I don't expect quick Progress. After all, I got still Stuff to do, which consumes a lot of Time, like recalibrate my Music Collection. The Bonus might be focused on Lucy this Time (Something about her being more down than usual and Lincoln perhaps consoling her as her youngest older Sibling), since it's about Napstablook (That is, if Lincoln makes it to him in that Chapter, otherwise, it would be just "Stroll through the Ruins")
All, that I understand about your "Undertale Parents Scenarios", is, that it's basically a Fanfiction about various Undertale Characters (After the Events of the True Pacifist Ending) adopting an abandoned Child and raising it as their own. It would make easier to write the Original on Microsoft Word, making it possible to store it among your Files.
Yeah, and the first ridiculously long Operation Name, I came up with, could be "Operation: Convince "Mother Toriel" (Any other Mother-related Nickname you could come up with) to let me leave the Ruins so I can head Home through the Underground filled with inhuman Beings and also Think of a Shorter Name For This Operation". Other typical Running Gags from the Series would be:
)Lincoln breaking the 4th Wall (Sans and Flowey might tend to it as well, because they are both aware of the Power to SAVE) and wearing nothing but his Underwear, while reading his Comics ( Thinking about it, it could be used, when Lincoln enters Hotland, you know, because it's so hot, that he can't withstand the Heat fully dressed and would require to get some Kind of heatproof Item, like a fireproof Version of his Clothes )
) Lori communicating with Roberto or constantly saying "Literally"
) Leni having her ditzy Moments
) Luna speaking with british Accent or quoting Song Titles and Lyrics (Speaking about it, you might as well add the Musical Version to your Inspiration Source www.youtube.com/watch?v=99g8k_… )
) Luan telling bad Jokes related to the current Situation "Listening to my Jokes is not as "PUN"-ishing as you think." "LUAN!"
) Lynn playing any Kind of Sport
) Lucy making other People flinch, by appearing out of Nowhere
) Lana doing disgusting Things
) Lola turning metaphorically into a Dragon www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUzugJ… ;
) Lisa inventing another Contraption far too complicated for a regular Mind to understand
) Lily saying "Poo-Poo" ( wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images… wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images… )
)Clyde daydreaming about a Date with Lori and whenever Clyde interacts with Lori, one of the following 3 Things might happen: Starts to act like a malfunctioning Robot (www.youtube.com/watch?v=uWHEPl… ; ), nosebleed and faint
)The Loud Parents' Faces being showed mostly partially (Til the Christmas Special)
Also, I think, I came up with an possible Use for the Gaster Blaster : It would be used by Sans as a "LOVE"-Tester in the final Corridor. If Lincoln didn't got any "LOVE" at all, the Blast wouldn't hurt him (It would be like a regular Flashlight Ray: Harmless). But if he got some "LOVE", then Lincoln would lose half of his HP and be unable to regenerate his HP over half of his MAX HP, as well as it would lower his ATK and DEF depending on how much "LOVE" Lincoln gained (Which, of Course, won't happen).
As for the Reference of Undyne the Undying , Undyne might be daydreaming about herself of how she would be immortalized within History Books.
The Reference of Mettaton NEO would be the following: When Asgore ordered Alphys to create a Human-fighting Machine, she develops the Blueprints for Mettaton. At the Beginning it would look like Mettaton NEO. Of Course she was aware, that constructing it would be difficult ( Except for the Genocide Route, where she would get enough DETERMINATION to do it). Sometime later, she somehow met Hapstablook (Mettaton's Ghost) And found a Way to solve her Robot Problem, by making Hapstablook the Heart and Soul of Mettaton. Afterwards she made easier Blueprints, which would include Mettaton EX instead.
It makes the Story Way less predictable by adding something additional (Because People, who know the Story, might get faster bored).
For Example, before leaving Lincoln after the Battle, Toriel might warn him about what lies ahead, which she usually does after dying during the Battle on a Neutral Run: "Before you leave, listen to me, small one... If you go beyond this door, Keep walking as far as you can. Eventually, you will reach an exit. ... .... ASGORE... Do not let ASGORE take your soul. His plan cannot be allowed to succeed. ....... Be good, will you? Farewell, my child." (It would make to the Newbies an Impression, that Asgore's the Main Villain , by portraying him like a classic Final RPG Boss (Just like in the Kickstarter Trailer youtu.be/Bf8L4S9cixc?t=2m35s ). By saying "the male Version" you admit, that you're gonna make Chara female (And base her off from Linka img00.deviantart.net/5914/i/20… www.google.at/imgres?imgurl=ht… ), are ya? Also, if you intend to make Fanart with Papyrus, look over here: sybergamer16.deviantart.com/ar…
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Cupcakes1224 In reply to DaniOskar [2017-01-22 00:26:59 +0000 UTC]
[Thank you for some of the ideas and references! I'm gonna work on the next chapter now and probably it's bonus!]
[Yes, Chara is indeed female! Don't know if I'm gonna make another fan art though since I'm already working on my own personal drawings!]
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DaniOskar In reply to Cupcakes1224 [2017-01-22 15:36:32 +0000 UTC]
wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images… Will wait for it with Excitement.
Personally, I say, that the Analysis of Frisk's and Chara's Gender is mindblowing to me wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images… , mostly because in Appearance they do both look like 5-10 Year old Children with Hair of middle Length, (presumably) a feminine Voice (Which is usual at that Age. There are many voice actors who are capable of sounding like children and teenagers, often booking more challenging roles in commercial, animation and so on. Mostly Women with a high Voice are casted for Children Voices (Honorable Examples: Sabine Bohlmann (German Voice Actress of Lisa Simpson, Haley Long, Jirachi ), Grey DeLisle/Griffin (Frida Suarez from El Tigre, Lana, Lola, Lily, Yumi, Mandy), Mae Whitman (Katara , Rose (American Dragon), April O'Neil from Modern TMNT ), Jessie Flower (Toph Beifong ). Child Actors on the other Hand are mostly rare) and being flat-chested (Girls start to get Mass in the Bust and Hips usually during Puberty starting at the Age of 11-13 www.rayur.com/wp-content/uploa… ). Aside from that, further Ideas/References worth to mention/suggest: "Coming Soon"
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