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Currythecat — A Good Day For Spider-Man
Published: 2011-11-23 15:20:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 597; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description A good day for Spider-Man.
By:Axel Karlsson.

It's a normal and quite day in New York, the busy people on the streets scurry aboute their bussines, everyone too busy to notice one troubled civilian in a downtown alley, it's a woman, aboute the age of nineteen, she is being robbed!, her brown hair swayes as she tries to run away, but to no good, the robber has quickly cathed up to her, she tries to scream for help, but there is nobody to listen to her call for help, but just as the robber has grabbed her bag and turned around something pulls the bag out of his hands, and when he looks up, he sees the hero of the day, SPIDER-MAN, Spider-Man jumps down from the balcony wich he hung onto, landing smouthly beside the woman, giving her purse back and says jokingly, "Here, happy christmas.", A bad joke indeed, the robber even said soo, but thats all he said, because right after the woman ran out of the alley, Spider-Man, stringed a few weblines, they hit the robbers legs, the robber has no time to say "Ohh no..", before Spidey janks hard with the webline, dragging the robber to the ground, he then swings the bad guy to the police station, he smiles and chuckles with a dark voice , "HO HO HO, I'm Spidey Clause, are there any nice cops here?", he hands the police the bad guy, he then turns around, and leaves, a hero's work is never done as he hears an alarm from a nearby bank, and off he swings, to beat up some bad guys, and after that he had to meet MJ, he thought to himself "Ugghh, how will i ever get to my private life if these guys keep breaking the law!?", suddenly his phone rings, he picks up in mid-air, spinning another webline, holding onto it with one hand, holding the phone to his ears with the other, the one who called is MJ, she sounds angry, "Peter, where are you?! I thought you were supposed to meet me at breakfast...", MJ said, wich reminded Peter aboute..."SNAP! It was all wrong, he was supposed to meet MJ after breakfast, not now, now he was supposed to meet Gwen Stacy, and right after that he got to go to Oscorp", Spider thought to himself, Spidey replied, trying to make up an exuse for not being there, it ended with MJ hanging up the phone, Spidey didn't have time to be sad or feel much, he was headed the wrong way! He had passes the bank 5 minutes ago, he sighed and swinged around, heading back to his heroic duties................ the life of Spider-Man
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Comments: 21

cyimang [2011-11-23 18:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-23 19:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks, anything that might i might improve?

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-23 22:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Sentence structure...

The ideas are sound, but you can't tell where the thought
ends and begins with it being all commas and not a lot of
periods..

That's all I see..(hope that didn't sound too harsh...)

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-24 14:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thanks, but i', sure it will be better as we progress, i havn't written anything in years, soo all and all i'm pretty proud of it, XD, Thanks for the feedback, i shall improve..XD

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-24 15:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I understand man

You're very welcome! And I wait to see what you come up
with next

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-28 21:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Most likely i will do a Goblin fight, or perhaps a new series..."The Diary Of A Symbiote" That tells the story of the symbiote, you know NOT venom or US, but the black quite goop, it has feelings aswell, XD But most likely I'll do Gobby, since he's my fav villian, Venom comming in next.

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-28 21:48:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesome man!! Cools!

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-28 21:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Yup, COOLS tools, mools, stouls..XD

Well...umm XD?

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-28 22:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Uh.. How you?

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-29 18:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Umm, i don't know.XD

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-29 19:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Well.. You're up?

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-29 19:17:59 +0000 UTC]

YES, I'v been up for more than 5/8 hours now, It's just that I'v 'ad school...

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-29 19:39:52 +0000 UTC]

Ahh.. Okey dokey

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-29 19:47:34 +0000 UTC]

And I'v made a new figure, I'm working on Venom right now, BUT i can't seem to find a way to get his tounge to you know...roll in...roll out...XD It's difficult, last Venom figure i made was made out of socks, it was really awesome, funny what you can do with regular stuff like socks and turn 'em into masterpieces..XD

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-29 19:54:23 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! I keep trying to go to your Youtube page,
but it doesn't lead anywhere..

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-29 19:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, dammit...Alright I'll send you a link via a note...

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-29 19:58:24 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-29 20:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Alright...

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-29 20:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Eh?

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Currythecat In reply to cyimang [2011-11-29 20:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Nothing..

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cyimang In reply to Currythecat [2011-11-29 20:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty then..

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