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Published: 2007-10-08 00:42:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 3836; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 41
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After this page, no more shirtless guys! 0_o So savour it while you can.
All comments welcome.
Dragons of Pern is copyrighted by Anne McCaffrey
The characters and situations are my own
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K'mlar: "Not to the healer? How did you know that would help?"
J'lantir: "Well Zarinth does have a current ACLS certification..."
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Savoring, savoring, I am totally going to miss K'mlar and K'or shirtless.
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*drinks in the sight of the shirtless guys* Siiiiiiigggggggghhhhhh~ I'll miss the shirtless scenes!
Is K'mlar throwing a fit? >3
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Yeeep, he's a little headstrong.
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Why did none of your guys ever have nipples?
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It's an anime style thing, I don't want to put in nipples till I can draw chests better.
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It's ok, I understand. Lol, same reason anime characters don't have anything....down below.....unless it's a sensual scene. Nothing to detrect from the pure lines of the body, eh?
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lovely
but few mistakes:
- panel3: no background between hair (iot should be there instead of white...
-panel5: little problem about the arm.. at first i thought he was standing with his back front.. then i just was confused...
however you get better and better with faces
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Yeah...I missed that spot in the hair, but then I was too lazy to fix it...I do that so much.
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I am so damned perfecytionist when I work on Asurit's comics - just my little deviousness
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nooooooooooooooooooooooooo! 
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Hmm, wonder what will come next?Not like K'lmar to be so flustered so easily. I look forward to finding out more, meanwhile I shall savour the lovely torsos.
Oh, and the water texture looks great as well, I love the tones.
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The story line is moving along well, good expression.
I love the clothes you design but I will miss the shirtless scenes. lol
Cynth
"Green dragons areβ¦ how do I put it, kindly? Eager, loving, willing, too friendly for their own goodβ¦"
Debera, rider of green Morath
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nice story and i can really see your art improving with every page.
something you might consider is drawing on your word bubbles instead of pasting them on after. it will make your word bubbles look like part of the art instead on something added later plus you can get more creative with not only the bubbles but also the bubble's tail.
anyway hope to read more soon.
ND
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True, but I have issues guessing how much space the writing is going to take up on the actual page. I have very small print, and I like to use them to cover stuff up that I hate when I get to the final toning.
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lol yeah lots of artist do that in fact one of our main artist use to do that all the time. hehe
ND
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Yay! New page!
And why no more shirtless guys? *pouts*
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Aw, K'mlar's stomping off in a huff. I like how it looks like Zarinth is sheilding him from sight with her wing. Its cute.
Its fun to rereading the comic. There's totally gonna be a triangle between K'or, K'mlar, and Colianth's rider (whoes name I can never remember!). Id bet any amount of money! I cant wait to see more! I just love this comic!
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Maaaybe.....-._-. .-_.-
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so wait.. im having issues following....... he's..... mad? that the other kid helped him?
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Yeah, K'mlar's a little bit of a spaz. He just really doesn't like that guy and is angry that he had to rely on his help earlier.
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oohhhh hahahaha spaz
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