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cursedkitty — I Need A New Angel
Published: 2002-11-18 19:40:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Sure he hurt me
Sure he treated me badly
Sure I let it roll off my back
I just let it slide countless times
Let him tell me I was bad
Let him tell me I was unworthy
I took his abuse and let it go
I tried to forget how much it hurt
It was only words
Only sentences
It was nothing to be bothered about
But it still hurts
And you say he doesn't deserve me and why do I bother with him?
I made a promise
That I wouldn't let him lose to you
That I wouldn't abandon our friendship no matter what
But what can I do? What should I say?
Where is my guardian angel now?
He went out to lunch and hasn't come back
I need a new angel
A set of protective wings
To guard me from the pain of others' words
To keep their knives from stabbing me in the back
To keep the arrows from piercing my heart
Will you be my angel?
Can you enfold me in your arms and tell me everything will be alright?
Can you heal the hurt he's given me?
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Comments: 7

blueraven7171 [2002-11-19 04:12:44 +0000 UTC]

I like the path of your emotions in the poem but I am sad for you because I can tell this is a pain your truly feeling...your words are strong and well written I hope you will find your heart to be the same.

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proud2bjunkie [2002-11-19 02:14:31 +0000 UTC]

wooooooow

thats really good

i like the emotion throughout it, though (and dont take this badly, its from a poetryhelper even though you didnt ask) it somehow feels like the emotion however strong has been dulled by the words and while its there its kind of like background music, there but no ones really paying attention.

other than that, this is really good

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zuzi [2002-11-19 00:43:00 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem... verbal abuse is a funny thing... they're only words, but they hurt like a knife, but a knife stab leaves wounds where words show no scars.... but it's the words that hurt the most. I used to say, Sticks and Stones may break my bones, but Words can break my spirit. I hope you can get away from the one that hurts you, because if he really cared, he would not say such things to you to hurt you intentionally. Very good poem.

-Zuzi!-

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KitBashCreations [2002-11-18 21:14:04 +0000 UTC]

very nice. I'm sorry to hear hes giveing you such troubles *hugs tightly* if i was ever face to face to him, i'd give him my two cents bout it. I'll be your angel

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infinitybreeze [2002-11-18 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]

:-/ Angels are funny things. The most detailed, and theoretically true, account of angels is the Christian Bible. It said on every occasion that an angel appeared that the witnesses were frightened, and when demons appeared, nobody was freaked. Remember this- Angels are not soothing. Open yourself up, put the guard down and drop any expectations because only then will you get the message. Angels are out there...just be open.

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cursedkitty [2002-11-18 19:58:39 +0000 UTC]

But he is a bastard...and he's supposed to be my friend and he says mean things to me that I don't think friends would say to each other...there's only so much one can take...

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vaines [2002-11-18 19:49:45 +0000 UTC]

I see you are confused about what's going on...I hope you get to heal yourself. It seems as if you still hold to the person that hurt you, so I suggest you try to give him another chance, apart if he's a bastard of course.

The poem is lovely, I enjoyed it. I liked the use of questions throughout the poem.

Again, hope you heal yourself.

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