Comments: 7
blueraven7171 [2002-11-19 04:12:44 +0000 UTC]
I like the path of your emotions in the poem but I am sad for you because I can tell this is a pain your truly feeling...your words are strong and well written I hope you will find your heart to be the same.
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proud2bjunkie [2002-11-19 02:14:31 +0000 UTC]
wooooooow
thats really good
i like the emotion throughout it, though (and dont take this badly, its from a poetryhelper even though you didnt ask) it somehow feels like the emotion however strong has been dulled by the words and while its there its kind of like background music, there but no ones really paying attention.
other than that, this is really good
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infinitybreeze [2002-11-18 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]
:-/ Angels are funny things. The most detailed, and theoretically true, account of angels is the Christian Bible. It said on every occasion that an angel appeared that the witnesses were frightened, and when demons appeared, nobody was freaked. Remember this- Angels are not soothing. Open yourself up, put the guard down and drop any expectations because only then will you get the message. Angels are out there...just be open.
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cursedkitty [2002-11-18 19:58:39 +0000 UTC]
But he is a bastard...and he's supposed to be my friend and he says mean things to me that I don't think friends would say to each other...there's only so much one can take...
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vaines [2002-11-18 19:49:45 +0000 UTC]
I see you are confused about what's going on...I hope you get to heal yourself. It seems as if you still hold to the person that hurt you, so I suggest you try to give him another chance, apart if he's a bastard of course.
The poem is lovely, I enjoyed it. I liked the use of questions throughout the poem.
Again, hope you heal yourself.
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