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Published: 2012-04-17 22:30:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 28600; Favourites: 444; Downloads: 70
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What is the perfect body? Who decides what is acceptable, pretty, handsome and so forth? Do we always have to be so critical about others that don't fit society's illusions of normal? I for one embrace the absence of the mundane. For those that see porn, I see art at its essence. Give me some pointers on what I could have done to make this picture even better. Point out my mistakes. Thanks!Related content
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Next time ask her to remove the panties & either completely shave or not.Β Your use of DOF is poignant.Β Nicely done.
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Such a beautiful pussy! Β Nice shot!
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She has a pretty pussy... not trying to be crude.
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I'm not critical of any ones work. I enjoy art of all types. One's eye might say yes, another may see something else. Here I see the female body as a work of art. How? God is all that when it comes to creating wonders in Heaven and on Earth.Β
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I'm not trying to be crude but gentlemen, if you're girl has a bigger labia then you should consider yourself lucky, because its easier for you to give her oral.
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I consider myself lucky everyday.Β
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I agree with you and always wonder why bigger labias are regarded as "porn", although they just look different and are as natural and beautiful as any others. Humankind has come to a point where double moral standarts and pure ignorance determine what is pretty, what is normal, what is "okay to publish".
In fact, smaller labias are actually more "porn" than bigger ones, or have you recently seen relatively big labias in porn videos? The answer is probably no, because small, non visible labias are the main ideal of beauty, that's also why so many women undergo vaginal surgeries.
I love the shot, she looks beautiful and I wish more people would notice
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Man, thanks for those words!
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Had one without and I didn't like it. The eyes would travel too far away from the subject. having panties there and slightly out of focus helps keep the eyes where I want them.
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My first thought when asked for critique was that the model could be better trimmed. But then I looked again and thought, 'No. Keep the hair. It reminds the viewer that this was a real person, bareing their most inner privates for the camera, for Art.' Speaking of Art however, a way to make it more 'Artsy' would be to have shot this in B&W, or else take it to PhotoShop and turn the Saturation WAAAY down to achieve the same effect.
Meh, my two cents worth.
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Thanks! If people don't give me ideas and advise I can't grow. I do wish I centered it better. That model being my wife, I'm sure I'll get plenty more opportunities.
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This is too short for a critique, but I think the hair is distracting to the image. I think it should have been shaven, but maybe it goes along with your image's message.
Overall, I enjoy it. I really like the negative, positive space in the image, creates some really cool shapes.
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NO. It's not distracting-- you're just not used to seeing it are you?
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Clever indeed. Not addressing my comment's content and instead attacking the characteristics of a stranger. I see you are well versed in the finer points of debate and critique. Bravo, Sir.
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Weak troll is weak. Instead of wasting more space on this page, i'll give some more critique.
The main vertical line of the image is slightly off center, which may be incidental but in either case, really fits the theme.
The upper eighth of the image looks over-exposed from the light, though this does push the first glance towards the more detailed subject. Personally I would have opted for the first glance landing else where, like perhaps the extreme lower eighth, and having the lines of the panties do their job and pull sight towards the subject. Establishing some sort of visual loop would go a long way to make this image last instead of being easy digest and move on.
Good luck, keep on keepin on.
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Personally whether it was shaven or not I don't think that is a big deal. As a black female I think this lady has a very nice kitty. It's a great picture. Simetimes I get embarrassed to show mine, even to my bf because there are so many influences out there saying that you have to look a certain way down there. 
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It's awesome to hear that you get such positive influence from it, and you have a good point in that it is a rather minor detail. I only mentioned it because so much of it was already shaven, I figured you should go all one way or another.
Don't be ashamed of your body. As long as your taking care of yourself, eating right, getting moving, you're just fine the way you are. Ask your boyfriend, i'm sure he'll tell you you look just fine!
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Most guys like a little hair. It reminds them that they are with a woman and not a little girl.
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I'm just referring to the image in terms art, not the reality of what the picture represents. Also, that's not really a valid argument, and i'm not advocating one way or another. Again, just trying to give suggestions for improving the artistic value of it.
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Ebony labia is beautiful. Thanks
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This lovely kitty is much better looking than your face.
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Wonderful job at being mature, my friend. Wonderful job, indeed.
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Then don't look. Not my fault you can't appreciate the human body for it's many beautiful forms.
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Okay, well, I think that beauty is definitely in the eye of the beholder, meaning each of us specifically reacts to such an image in our own way. I love this photo and don't see porn at all. Instead I see something edible and worthy of appreciation. If I have suggestions on improving this one, it would be that the symmetry is off a little with the dangle of the panties behind her labia. Instead I would like to see soft light illuminating her inner crotch on both sides of those beautiful labia. The soft light would bring attention to her labia and would wrap around her inner thighs in a caressing way, diverting my attention away from the tiny, imperceptible hairs that evaded the razor. I might try to open her legs slightly more to make her jewels all the more inviting on that natural palette of beauty between her legs. Amazing physique and skin tone on this beautiful, young woman. Bravo!
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Thanks for the awesome comments and advise! Makes me want to go back to the drawing board and try the techniques you mentioned. Good thing is the model is my lady cause it's very hard to find women who want to show their labia and do it at an affordable price. I'll post something new here real soon.
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Yeah,I can imagine every model wants serious pay these days. You're extremely lucky to have such a supportive lady. I cannot encourage you more to keep experimenting, especially with your lady. You're building a fanclub out here!!
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