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Curticle — close to the broken

Published: 2010-06-28 04:15:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1166; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 19
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Description He can't sleep, he can't eat
He keeps thinking about her behind the locked door of her bedroom
As she knowingly tortures the shell that is left of her bridegroom
And what did he do to deserve
This whore of a wife who parades her disgrace to his face now
When he loved her and gave up his life in more ways than she knows how
And all I can say is that

Love is a terrible art, it’s a hook in the heart
That can drag you on broken glass
And as you protest the shards in your flesh
The hook tears out your chest until you’re just a broken mess

Where is God in this rot?
Depraved she commits the most heinous of sins and breaks her vows
But he loves her despite all the crimes she devises in his house
Where is God? I’ve been taught
That He’s close to the broken, it's true I have spoken with Him some
When I look in my brother's eyes I can see where his love comes from
And all he can say is that

Love is a terrible art, it’s a hook in the heart
That can drag you on broken glass
And as you protest the shards in your flesh
The hook tears out your chest until you’re just a broken mess

But he has mercy on her lover and does not bleed him dry
A credit to his self control if it were me that monster would probably die

Love is a beautiful thing, she can make your heart sing
When you’re walking on broken glass
She will open your eyes, make your heart feel alive
Point you toward the sunrise
Help you leave all this broken mess behind

Love is a beautiful thing
Will you leave this broken mess behind?
broken mess by the classic crime
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idk if this should have a mature filter on it or not because of the..gore i guess? but if someone complains or thinks there should be one i wont hesitate to do so.

made on MS paint like all of my other crappy art

curtis and art (c) me
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Comments: 42

dothackhaseo [2011-03-27 02:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Good job. It really brings out the song well.

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xcloudedblueyes [2011-03-16 22:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. thats awesome.

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Chevysaur [2010-08-03 19:04:09 +0000 UTC]

TIITXCINFG

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Ash-Crash [2010-07-06 07:36:42 +0000 UTC]

That's disturbing..I love it :3
I wish I was as creative and skilled as you.
*won't bother trying because will fail too hardcore and embarrass self* u_u

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Curticle In reply to Ash-Crash [2010-07-06 07:44:34 +0000 UTC]

yus. disturbing is good, sisawee of mine

shutup you buttlicker. you are creative and skilled *facepunch*


you should practice and i will teach you LOL. we can has art lessons

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Ash-Crash In reply to Curticle [2010-07-06 07:50:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL. Sisawee <3

Facepunch. LOL New Moon *ninja dodges the facepunch, only getting barely hit in the jaw and causing snot to fly out* *skids between your legs and punches your vagina*

Okay, art lessons!

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Curticle In reply to Ash-Crash [2010-07-06 07:57:49 +0000 UTC]

i thought of new moon too when i said that. i was all HURHURHUR when i said it because i knew you would think of the same thing

WTF DONT TOUCH MY VAGINA. *kicks you, causing foot to go up your bum and cause internal bleeding, and then death*

YES. art lessons i say! ART LESSONS. first create a character and then we will go from there LOL. you need something to draw first

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Ash-Crash In reply to Curticle [2010-07-06 08:00:49 +0000 UTC]

LMAO. I love that movie. Lol Eclipse:
Jacob: "I kissed Bella...And she broke her hand...Punching my face."
Charlie: *Gives WTF look*

MY ASSSSSSS. *makes distorted face* *crumples to the floor* *dies*

Idk how to create a character. LAWL.

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Curticle In reply to Ash-Crash [2010-07-06 08:05:49 +0000 UTC]

OHMYGOD LMFAO. that made me laugh so hard when i first saw that. when it was all THUD i was like ROFL

kay i will help you with your character

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Ash-Crash In reply to Curticle [2010-07-06 08:08:32 +0000 UTC]

LOL! I know right?! I was trying so hard to shut up. Cuz you know me. I can laugh at something so small for hours on end. So can you. lol.

Thanks! sexy face.

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Curticle In reply to Ash-Crash [2010-07-06 08:13:42 +0000 UTC]

i know LOL. i still laugh about it. and when i fell in the theatre..i still can cry from laughing at that..IT TOO FUNNAY ROFL

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Ash-Crash In reply to Curticle [2010-07-06 08:15:01 +0000 UTC]

LOL!!!! Omfg I know. The janitors were laughing at you.
And when me and you were playing fruit salad in gym, and only we fell yet we were so far apart! XD And we fell at the same time too..Right on the black line, where we had to bend down and touch it then run back. LMAO

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Curticle In reply to Ash-Crash [2010-07-06 08:19:18 +0000 UTC]

SO EMBARRASSING
my face turns red just thinking about it ;__;
BUT IT WAS SO FUNNY LOL

GET THAT COLOR PALLETTE DONE YOU POOFACE

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Ash-Crash In reply to Curticle [2010-07-06 08:20:32 +0000 UTC]

LOL! I turn red every time I think about singing backstreet boys in the car driving to montana. "Am I sexuaaal?!" We sang that at such a young age, out loud...LMFAO, mom and Ken must have found that hysterical!

I'm too lazy xD

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Curticle In reply to Ash-Crash [2010-07-06 08:22:31 +0000 UTC]

OH NO LOLOL. HOW DARE YOU REMIND ME
im so embarassed..i wont be able to look at them with a straight face tomorrow... or today, seeing as its like..2:20 ROFL

FFFf DO IT

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Ash-Crash In reply to Curticle [2010-07-06 08:23:09 +0000 UTC]

LMAO SORRY

NO XD

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Violette-mei [2010-06-30 00:01:33 +0000 UTC]

lovely ♥ you did really good on this, i cant believe you did this in suckish MS Paint..just, wow.

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Curticle In reply to Violette-mei [2010-06-30 00:05:37 +0000 UTC]

awwe thank you soo much! ;u;
yes. MS paint is very suckish LOL. its all ive ever used though

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Violette-mei In reply to Curticle [2010-06-30 00:14:40 +0000 UTC]

same here, but i dont have a tablet or anything and i have AWFUL mouse control. ahahaha. XD

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Curticle In reply to Violette-mei [2010-06-30 00:16:50 +0000 UTC]

holy crapola i would die if i didnt have a tablet LOL
i used to do all of my art with a mouse but it would take me like...a day and a half just to draw a stick person LOL
i have awful mouse control too

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Violette-mei In reply to Curticle [2010-06-30 00:23:19 +0000 UTC]

what kind of tablet do you have? just wondering...*really wants one*

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Curticle In reply to Violette-mei [2010-06-30 00:24:09 +0000 UTC]

UMMM i think its a bamboo fun?
its not one of the huge expensive ones. C:

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Violette-mei In reply to Curticle [2010-06-30 00:29:22 +0000 UTC]

hmm, i havent heard of that one, do you know where its from?

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Curticle In reply to Violette-mei [2010-06-30 00:31:21 +0000 UTC]

i got mine from future shop, i believe. but you can get it from pretty much anywhere that sells electronics. i got mine for like 90 bucks 8D

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Violette-mei In reply to Curticle [2010-06-30 01:52:10 +0000 UTC]

ooh niceee.

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ShyBurger [2010-06-28 06:25:56 +0000 UTC]

baby< 33333333
this is gorgeous. you do deadly art amazing.
you do everything amazing.
< 33333

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Curticle In reply to ShyBurger [2010-06-28 20:18:26 +0000 UTC]

dkfjsjk thanks so much <3
you are amazing! <3
i love you! ty ty ty

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ShyBurger In reply to Curticle [2010-06-28 21:39:31 +0000 UTC]

fttt.
you're more amazing, darling.
< 333
your welcome.

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Tesso [2010-06-28 06:11:39 +0000 UTC]

wow.. this is beautiful but sad all at the same time :C very stunning work, The emotions I feel here when I look at this piece are just unbeliveable

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Curticle In reply to Tesso [2010-06-28 20:29:50 +0000 UTC]

fff thank you for the comment. it means a lot ;u;

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Judaime [2010-06-28 05:25:53 +0000 UTC]


This is breathtaking. It brings tears to your eyes the minute you see it. Excellent work on this. ; AAA ; Curt looks so, soooooo.... baww. <3333 I love your skills. The heart is so superbbbbb. <33

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Curticle In reply to Judaime [2010-06-28 20:30:23 +0000 UTC]

bawwww ashton thanks!
LOL superb. thats a good word

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Judaime In reply to Curticle [2010-06-29 22:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh don't you know it! :"D Superb makes fireworks blast in the sky ahaha

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Terryburr [2010-06-28 05:14:01 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFF OMG sooo sad :C
gosh im depressed from how good and sad this is!
such a good job! uuuhhhh homo!!! i totally love how you did this!
the heart looks sooooooooo goood everything does C:
sooo sad, great poem btw

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Curticle In reply to Terryburr [2010-06-28 05:20:00 +0000 UTC]

LOL NO YOUR A HOMO. gosh i love homos HEHEHE
thanks so much!
and they are actually lyrics to a song 8D

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Terryburr In reply to Curticle [2010-06-28 05:39:30 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW 8d LOL! ohhhhh song lyrics
whaaat song????? 8D

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Curticle In reply to Terryburr [2010-06-28 20:28:26 +0000 UTC]

broken mess by the classic crime 8D

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Murderlovey [2010-06-28 04:47:23 +0000 UTC]

amazing. o_o i love you for making this. <3

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Curticle In reply to Murderlovey [2010-06-28 05:19:18 +0000 UTC]

LOL thanks
i love you for saying that <3

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Kiocah [2010-06-28 04:20:36 +0000 UTC]

D: Poor thing~ fffffff. <3 /snuggles
Love the eyes, or.. I suppose lack of. <_<

And I dun' think it needs a filter. Then again I dun' like the filters much. Haha.

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Curticle In reply to Kiocah [2010-06-28 04:25:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL thanks :'D

ffff i hate filters too. i didnt think it really needed one either

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Kiocah In reply to Curticle [2010-06-28 04:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Welcomeeee. <3

/nod. C:

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