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Snowree [2013-03-25 06:13:45 +0000 UTC]

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Since i am going to do an art trade with those two cats, i might as well do a critique ;D
Now i am going to explain why i rate this picture so-so.
The cats are cute ^^ but maybe you could fix the tail XD im not sure what dimension the tail is posed e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>
Originality? not 100% original. I've seen a few pictures that also have two animals sitting together in the snow.
Technique is simple, BUT you could fix the shading ^^ it's hard to see the shading. i suggest you use the blur tool less, because it makes the shading not stand out. and it's night, so the shading for the cats should stand out against the light.
overall, it's pretty good ^^ and i know that your art improved alot. Keep up the good work!!
From Swifty and Snowree XD

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blazinq [2012-12-13 16:33:50 +0000 UTC]

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Now i dont write many critiques so you know...

I love the snowflakes in the background they are so cute! i love your style of body ginger one but the other the legs kinda look a bit weird but otherwise amazing. i think the snow on the shoulders and top of the heads look a bit silly i think it could of done with some more deatail. I love the golden heart and how their cheeks are touching <3 You have an amazing eye style i LOVE it!! Also i love ho the tails are rapped over each other e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Hope this helps x

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EpicEsbreon [2012-12-13 01:03:22 +0000 UTC]

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alright so this is my first critique so bare with me on this!

Firstly, I LOVE the way they touching cheeks! The one eye closed is very cute too ^^ The pattern on the female are lovely as well as the tom. The females isn't very realistic though, but i think that was the point. The eyes, are amazing! They always look so detailed! The tiny little golden heart was very Cute. I like how you made it glow.

The snow is nice, but a moon would have bin great! maybe some stars to show its night. I think the snow on the ground could have bin a bit more detailed, like show some uneven spots and lumps. also where there sitting should have bin indented, as well with the tails.
The snow on the tails, head, and shoulders should have bin thicker. It Kinda looks like fog. The Snowflakes, are amazing! I like how some are bigger and some are very small.

You never fail to amaze me.

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AnArtisticArtist [2012-12-12 18:38:57 +0000 UTC]

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Okay, I don't write alot of critique's, and I 'm not too good at it, but I'll try! c:

Firstly, I like how you made the snow in the background! I really like it how you didn't make every single snowflake have the same size. I also like how you made their expressions. And I like the markings on the white cat, although they're not realistic, but I don't think it's supposed to be xD

Now for something else, what you could do next time, is maybe make the snow a bit more detailed, give it a bit more shading. Also, since they are sitting in the snow, and it seems like they have been sitting there for a while, maybe make their paws covered in snow, and the spot where their tails touch the ground, too. And for the snow laying on their heads, and tails, maybe make it look a bit less blurry next time.
And one more thing, add a bit more shading, and make it just a bit less blurry, and maybe make the space around them a bit darker, since it's night.

Don't get me wrong though, I really like this picture, it's very cute!
I hope it helped a bit. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> Like I said, I'm not that good at giving critique's, and I've got alot to learn myself, but I just wanted to try.

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Redfeatherstar [2013-08-25 19:27:38 +0000 UTC]

It is so amazing!! I love the snow, how it falls on them, on the ground, from the sky! The glowing heart is beautiful!

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DerpyWolf44 [2013-05-04 14:10:32 +0000 UTC]

umm can i ask who are those two

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SwEeTxPiNk96 [2012-12-16 15:26:20 +0000 UTC]

awwww soo cute ^^

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PokeAnimalsLover [2012-12-13 13:44:57 +0000 UTC]

hnggghh ton kollin häntä näyttää niin pörröseltä ;-;
Ja agreedaan tuon lasisydämen kans
ja toi lumi...... ;-;

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MysticIceDragon [2012-12-12 23:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Ohmygod so cute

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Auroraclaw [2012-12-12 20:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is incredible ;V;

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HiroTheCinderace [2012-12-12 20:32:40 +0000 UTC]

It's so adorable.

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prismbattery [2012-12-12 19:43:35 +0000 UTC]

their so adorable!
It looks like my headcannon of Tigerheart and Dovewing!: ))

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Spottih [2012-12-12 18:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Is it random characters, or is is 'someone'?

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