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CuteLittleNeko — Ambipom Gijinka
Published: 2007-08-26 06:54:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1027; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 17
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my Ambipom (sp?) gijinka I did in pchat 8D; her name is BooneRelated content
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Nice job. x3
There are many issues with the anatomy but I want to avoid from being flamed. Tell me if you want critiques.
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no go ahead, tell me it all |D
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1.) Her formation, bending is off and dont match with her shoulders.
2.) She shoulders are different sizes.
3.) Her legs are too far apart-Her skirt is too far up on the left.
4.) Her elbow and shoulder dont look correct/connected, ext.
5.) Her neck is too far in, especially considering her too-small-shoulders.
6.) The nose is just a bit too far to the right. [Just a bit]
I wont talk about the shading, ext. since I see you did a quick job/not meant it to be intensive along with the creases in her outfit, so I wont hit those points. And when I say... too far to the left, ext. I mean from my perspective. Not her left.
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D8> wow.. I didnt realise all those faults till you said something, I guess looking at it a second time I see your point.. oops XD; thanks anyway
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Aww. Thanks. And its alright. XD
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