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cuteplushie04 — Anime Tokechu for DeathRetsu
Published: 2005-04-09 00:31:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1268; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 102
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Hmm ...well, I've made a couple of changes so that I could show you all how Tokechu (character of ) looks. Yes, she does wear bright yellow, and now I've straightened out her mouth, so it should look a tiny bit better.Please be generous with comments/favs/critique, and help me to improve my style further! ^^
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Comments: 45
the mallet looks a bit uneven, but other than that, <3 I looove it!! 
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good job. Only thing i wouldve changed is tha hand... sould be fixed to look more like its holding it.
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you have such a cute style, i love it. all of your chibi work a cute.. i'm a sucker for all things kawaii!
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Thanks ^^ I'm glad you like it!
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Great work, I love the way you blended the lighting. awesome.
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cute ^^ personally i reckon your pictures are better when the characters have smaller hair
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it looks great your use of colors is veryy good and also the hair is very decen 
and its CUTE!!!! OMG WTFBBQ!!!!!!!
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Um...well...maybe the top of the hair needs a little more work...the bottom is really good though!!
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Ah, now that looks better! Her clothes were a bit ugly before, if I may say it. This new version is better
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her haid seems abit big, The arm closest to the viewer needs to be longer or more bent because the size doesn't look the same but it's good all in all
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WOW!! Pretty!! Very nice, I love the colouring!! Looks a bit like Sakura!!
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I like this yellow one more than the previous one, just looks nicer for some reason.
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Oh~nya~I think, u have to improve da way u draw da hair..2 be silkier that is...overall..it's a seet sweet pic~
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Yea, I'm gonna try to do that in my next couple of pics ^^ Thanks!
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I really like this style.
As for critiques, her hands look a bit wrong. To hold that thing, all of her fingers would wrap around it, not just like... 2 fingers. ^^
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True. I can't draw hands XO Must get better! You can't handle the happiness!
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Hands are really, really hard. >.< I think I've successfully drawn a hand like... twice... in my whole life. D:
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Yea, I hate those damn things! 
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Her face is so nicely done, I really love it. I also like how you drew her hair and her little braid bun. You are great with eyes btw. I must fav this one too.
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Thanks, but now you're gonna have two identical favs in a row 
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very cute, I love the colour scheme. Yellows are always so pretty on cute characters :3 Her expression is very cute too and the only thing that bugs me is the background, it looks too foggy but maybe it was what you were aiming for! Anyways, very cute and lovely piece
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Yea, I tried to destroy the fog but if I had people would've realised that my background was just some squiggles
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Nice. The changes are pretty cool, but I like the other cloths better! ^_^
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That's okay! Some people prefer the old, others prefer the new XO CP can't win!
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She's very adorable! I really like the style of eyes you used! Also, wonderful job with the strains of hair! That's something I always have a hard time with, but you make it look so easy. The hammer is a nice touch. ^o^ Very awsome picture! Keep up the work!
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Ah, it wasn't that easy
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Then you must've worked hard! You're welcome CP-san!
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this is your best yet! its so cute! you did a really great job on the coloring and your line art is getting better ^^ awsome
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Thanks ^^ I'm glad you think I'm getting better!
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this has got to be one of the most terrifying yet adorably cuteist things i have ever seen. well done!
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