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Published: 2014-03-13 01:33:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 674; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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in order to enter you must give a critique based on the style, like if you like this style or notalso make a journal or poll to advertise
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Comments: 3
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1. i LOVE the eyes. fantastic shape and shading, they make your drawings come to life
2. the hair on #3 seems like a more realistic hairstyle than many drawings i've seen and #2 is unique
3. anatomy nice nice especially like their collarbones/shoulders amd curvy body types ver cute
4. your sketched line style can be appreciated by many but personally I think your drawings would benefit from going over a second time to make nice, neat lines and defined shapes. take extra care for hands and arms, redraw them a zillion times if you have to until it feels right to you. remember theres no rush
5. ok if i want this to be an honest critique i want to say that your posing could be considered as a bit awkward. try finding more ntural positions by studying how real people look and move
6. colors capture the characters of each girl but maybe these three light color together dont attract the eye to your drawing
7. LOVVEE the highlighting
8. mouths are perf and unique
ye i like your style
ugh can i just say it was super hard to try and put anything negative on here b/c ur amazing and perf and i counldnt come near your talent im just trying to make a good critique pls understand i hope it all came out as constructive
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I'll add my journal at a later point, if it's not too much trouble. Being on a mobile doesn't make it the easiest thing to do.
Before I critique anything else, I'd first to address your technique. I'll admit, I do love how you're able to give each character a distinct mood about them simply by placing their lines atop a different colour. The pale and swooping lines evoke a sense of femininity that I can't quite put my finger on. It is a style I've always envied, so I may be biased in that respect.
Now, let's address your anatomy. Considering that this takes after a slightly caricatured style, you have plenty of room to alter the body. The only points at which I can say the posing itself was awkward are in your drawing of the shoulders and hips. The shoulders are rather sharp, and almost look as if a shrug would be their relaxed position. The hips are fine for the most part, save the girl in the center. While I understand that you wished to give her high-rise jeans, you have to keep in mind the principle that fabric flows around form. Those hips look a little too boxy for my taste.
Additionally, I'd like to add a few things I love about this piece.
1. Hair types: It seems to me that on the realm of DeviantART artists seem to forget that not all hair is thin and straight. Seeing wavy and textured hair just made my day.
2. Those eyes are simply adorable. I can say no more.
3. You can draw noses. That is not an easy task by any stretch of the imagination.
Your designs are simple and refreshing. All too often, adoptables lack the originality you express here. The only reason I docked you stars on the originality category was simply because adoptable sheets are nothing new.
Overall, good job! I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future.
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