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Cyber999 — The Breaking Point [NSFW]
Published: 2014-03-07 04:22:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Author's Note: this is meant to be part of a normal story series, but I wrote it in the style of a play script in order to convey the whole scene better.

------Characters------

Fyurik is an immortal who physically appears to be in his early 20s (in this universe, immortals have the physical appearance of whatever age at which they first "died"). He was given the gift of infinite knowledge, and has been living for numerous centuries as the protector of his original family. Over time the wealth of knowledge at his disposal began to drive him insane, and at this time he finds his own life to be a complete joke. Because of this, he is extremely unpredictable.

Kano is a younger immortal, who is just shy of a century of life, that physically appears to be a little older than Fyurik. He has ambitions of controlling his home town, which just so happens to be the home town of Fyurik's family. He has married one of the family's daughters, and Fyurik soon learns that he is severely abusing her and disallowing her to go out in public to cover it up. Fearing the family's protector, Kano, now a high ranking official of the town, has the town guard capture Fyurik in hopes that he can either convert Fyurik to his side, or simply rid himself of the only person preventing him from controlling the large trading town they live in.

------The Scene------

[Within the dark confines of a secret room, Kano paces back and forth. There is a table of torture devices to the side of the room, and a large heavy chair bolted to the ground in the center of the room. Strapped into the chair is Fyurik: blindfolded, bloodied, and bruised. Kano is clearly nervous to have his greatest adversary in front of him, but also excited to have the meeting under his own conditions...and massively stacked in his favor. He paces the room and rants out loud to himself about his accomplishment, waving his arms around excitedly. Fyurik, despite his injuries, watches in amusement, calmly commenting on Kano's crazed remarks, although Kano is too caught up in his excitement to notice Fyurik's interjections.]

KANO: ...After all this time, after all this fear, I've finally done it! The legendary Fyurik, the Keeper of Knowledge, the protector of the Destral family...here he is, in my possession!...

FYURIK: I certainly hope I'm here. I don't know where else I would be.

KANO: ...All of his time, I was so afraid...but I cant believe it was so easy!...

FYURIK: Yes indeed, it was all too easy for your guards to attack me in my sleep.

KANO: ...My greatest foe...and I've captured him single handedly!...

FYURIK: I'm quite sure your guards have more than a single hand between them.

KANO: [seems to notice Fyurik for the first time and acts as though none of his ranting had occured] ...I'm sorry if the chair is uncomfortable for you, Fyurik...I would have prepared better accommodations, but I wasn't quite expecting to see you so soon.

FYURIK: [smiling] No worries, Kano. I am surprised as well that I've arrived here so soon.

KANO: I know, right?! I never thought you would go down so easily! [turns away from Fyurik and begins pacing again] Who would have thought the greatest mind in the world would be defeated so effortlessly?!

FYURIK: [laughing] Yeah, I know...it almost like I wanted to get captured.

KANO: Yeah, its like you- [stops pacing suddenly, a look of shock on his face] WHA..?

[Kano turns around to find that the chair is empty, the restraints undone and no sign of Fyurik. Kano backs against a wall, a look of complete terror on his face, and frantically looks around the room for his escaped hostage]

KANO: [barely a shaky whisper] ...Oh...fuck no...

[Kano bolts for the door but can't seem to open it. He hears an disturbingly calm voice from behind]

FYURIK: Going somewhere, Kano?

[Kano whirls around and sees Fyurik leaning against one of the walls, smiling casually. Kano presses hard against the door and tries to maintain his composure but is clearly failing to do so]

KANO: Uh...I was just...you know...I just needed to get....some...thing...I would've come right...back...I swear...I...just...

[Fyurik takes a few steps towards Kano, and Kano begins to panic even more]

KANO: L-Look, Fyurik...I...I don't know what y-you heard ab-bout m-me and your family...b-but I assure you...n-nothing s-s-serious happened and I...

[Fyurik is very close now, and Kano comes up with a last resort]

KANO: H-Hey! How about we make a deal? We could work together, You know? T-Two immortals ruling a town of weak mortal beings...just...just [barely speaks] please don't kill me...

[Fyurik is right in Kano's face now, still smiling]

FYURIK: You want a deal?

KANO: [relieved] Y-yeah...We could-

FYURIK: You want a deal? Here's the deal...

[at the beginning of the capital letters, Fyurik instantly goes from casual and calm to completely batshit raging insane]

FYURIK: You hurt her...one more FUCKING. TIME. AND I SWEAR I WILL END YOU, SO, FUCKING, HARD, THAT YOU WILL NOT EVEN REMEMBER WHAT ITS LIKE TO LIVE ANYMORE. DO YOU FUCKING UNDERSTAND ME?!?!

[Kano is shrinking against the wall with every word screamed at him, and he begins shaking and sobbing uncontrollably]

KANO: I'm sorrryyy...I just-

FYURIK: LISTEN TO ME, YOU LITTLE SHIT. YOU ARE OFFICIALLY FUCKED. YOU WILL NOT LIVE ANOTHER DAY IN YOUR MISERABLE ETERNAL FUCKING LIFE WITHOUT FEARING THE DAY THAT I RETURN TO REMIND YOU JUST HOW WELL OFF THESE MORTAL BEINGS ARE TO BE GIVEN THE CHANCE TO FEEL THE SWEET RELEASE OF DEATH.

[Kano tries to speak but only indistinguishable noises escape his mouth as he drops to his knees]

FYURIK: DO NOT TRY TO ESCAPE YOUR FATE, YOU SPINELESS SLAB OF WASTED ORGANS. IF YOU EVER TRY TO RUN, I WILL FIND YOU. YOU MIGHT AS WELL SEND ME A FUCKING POSTCARD AND SAVE ME THE TIME OF HUNTING YOU DOWN, YOU WORTHLESS FUCKING EXISTENCE, BECAUSE NO MATTER WHERE YOU TRY TO HIDE, NO MATTER WHO YOU TRY TO PRETEND TO BE, I WILL KNOW, AND I WILL NOT FORGET IT.

[Fyurik suddenly calms down, but maintains his dark glare and deadly tone of voice]

FYURIK: Get up.

[Kano staggers to his feet, his face covered in snot and tears. he tried to say something but Fyurik ignores it and points to the chair in the middle of the room]

FYURIK: Get in the chair.

KANO: [attempting to respond] B-but you said if-

FYURIK: [explodes] GET IN THE FUCKING CHAIR.

[Kano stumbles across the room and collapses into the chair. Fyurik tightens the restraints, holding Kano completely still]

KANO: W-what about the b-b-blindfold...?

FYURIK: [darkly calm once again] No. You will witness your fate. [looks around the room] Is this room soundproof?

KANO: W-well..yes...but...

[Fyurik picks up a wicked looking bladed tool from the table of torture instruments and eyes Kano dangerously]

FYURIK: Well...that sucks for you, I guess...

[END SCENE]
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