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CyberFell — Avatar/Persona update design (WIP)
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Published: 2019-05-20 20:12:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 249; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Avatar/Persona design update.
I wanted to add more to this character.
I got rid of the plug because it was getting in the way and added a little detail to the head and face to make it look more robotic.
I wanted to put a design on the back of the hoodie, but I don’t know what to put on it. I’ll probably just leave it blank or take the ‘X’ from the shirt to put on the back.
I’m open to suggestions.
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Comments: 7
Personally, I really like the way this was drawn. I love the little details! The only thing I would really suggest is that so many details might get annoying to draw in the long run, but since it’s an avatar, I think it should be okay!
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I really love this avatar, and I think you're right, the X on the back would be better.
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Aww, I liked the plug though, was like a cute tail, though also a sense of vulnerability (a visual reminder that the bab needs to charge periodically, and can be in trouble if they don't). But, it's your decision to make. I like that the facial lines and segmented neck, as well as the switch on the back, are reminiscent of Mettaton's design, making this character really fit the Undertale vibe. The magic-emitters on the hands are a great idea.
Does the switch do anything? :3
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I’m really not sure. Maybe to turn him off or switch to his NEO form.
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Ooooh, a NEO form would be so interesting to see! 
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He would also probably shoot magic metal bones and electric magic too.
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Wow, what wonderful update to the design!!
It looks a lot more like something original and personal, which I love very much!
All the little details and such are wicked! ^^)
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