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Published: 2004-05-31 22:05:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 573; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 223
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So i took this photo 'Communicate' a while back, on a sunny day.I liked the angle and everything, it was pretty cool, but the sky looked TOO boring, i wanted negative space but, blergh.
I started playing about with gradients in photoshop, ~picnic thought that would look "graphicy"
Anyway, after i put some of my typographical "skillz" into play, this is the result.
may i say: w00t.
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I'm in agreeance with ~sKHILLz , the get part needs to move up abit you can't really tell what it says. I like the negative space, the angle of the tower works well with the rest of the piece.
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this is really really cool i like the angle and the colors i like blue that is a good color to work with
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I like that. The gradient between the 'get yourself' and 'connected' aswell as the sky one. It's very smart... bit of a shame it takes a bit of effort to read the many bit, but if it was a main 'ad' or summit it'd be big and readable anyway
I like it, and the fact it kinda sticks to the whole blue thing BT has going... or did have going? Definately a lovely angle
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i agree with *ctyle it works really well and i think its very good. nice and minimal and clean
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I'm loving te negative space and the way the colours fade out in that blocky almost pixel art way.
typo is good picture is good, all good basically
adding some more strings to your bow
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thats quite good really. i don't like the word 'get' because you can't see all of it.
i have that song stuck in my head now 'gotta get yourself connected' which is irritaing lol.
i love the blue colouring, and the type down the right hand side is effective.
i like the angle of the image but the background is a bit grainy,
all in all (oooh i sound like that song by air) i think its good.
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i do like this perspective.
the 'typography' looks very good.
i have no idea about it myself, i hadn't heard of it until you mentioned it previously.
well done. a definate improvement once again.
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I like the angle and the perspective, and how you decided to do the sky.
And I also like how you did the typo, very fitting.
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though my opinion on bt ads lately is yuck, this is some pretty good design. this probably isn't something that bt would go for, but its a good, simple and uncluttered. i like it.
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I disagree with above and think the main typography "get yourself connected" is absolutely fine. Love the blending of that line, there.
I am however going to have to join the bandwagon, and suggest that background ramble be maybe moved, or shortened - at the moment it's a bit 'in your face'.
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this would work well as an advertisement, but maybe use a different font for "get yourself connected", maybe one without serifs?
I agree with the others about the main body txt, and also, Lupius' second suggestion
but this is a good picture in itself
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Being a bitch and following trends, I agree with both *Naryana and ~sKHILLz that the body text should be relocated.
Sorry.
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Looks pretty good. I really like that shot alot... I love negative space. Not too sure about the "Get" part... might need to come up a bit more. Real nice though, i like the top, but I have to agree with Naryana... Its a bit noisy in one spot for such great use of negative space...
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Great colours, you've actually made the towers new xpress-on cover look nice! Angle is pretty impressive too.
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oh yeah...sorry misseed something i thought like...you kno those dishs and shiz are ssending data and that...maybe like you could faintly add som binary code down the leeft flank of the picture i dunno
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Very nice, vibrant and I like the layer gradient at the top...the small print is also a nice effect...200 countrys across five continants...wow indeed..a good photo too
The decapitated "get" is poor....see it could be got or somthing...maybe a shear effect would look better? where the bottom half is like a water mark behind the 'yourself' just a suggestion but really i think you should have more head room for it...at least to slighly make out the 'e'
Sorry for a short comment but...well...i don't submit work that often...wouldn't hurt like dude
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Great photo and main tag line text. However i'm not sure on the main body text going down the top right. May of looked better in the bottom left but great angle on the photo!
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