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Published: 2011-05-02 12:28:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 23969; Favourites: 171; Downloads: 246
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DOWNLOAD FOR LARGER VIEWINGHere's a single page all in one version of my (really) failed attempt at 's 2009 contest.
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Great background and the physical changes of Jennifer Hulk are nicely done.
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Really good transitions, especially the top half and the feet.
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Thank you, tried to focus making it a slow but noticeable progression, not just separate single images
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Yes, it's good for what it is. You're still trying to improve your craft, and that's what a good artist does!
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Oh, it's not that bad
I like some of the subtle details - how she actually starts off smiling before the change kicks in and she realizes the rollercoaster ain't stopping. The shading on the last one's muscles is subtle but works, as well, and I like the background. Not sure if you made it or not, but it fits.
If I may make a suggestion, work on how the clothes would react against the flesh - the way that clothing would shift and bulge and strain before tearing away. It also gives you a chance to draw hilarious pushed-up boobs.
Otherwise, it's a lot of fun to look at and a nice work!
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I know, but I guess its also deceptive with regards my skill level in that pieced together from different years/styles/experience levels, early stages done in 2009 while the final stage was this year. I pondered whether to avoid cinematic clothes tearing but 2009 apparently was racing too much so I was stuck with that without adding more delays
and yes I drew the background
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I probably need to simplify my backgrounds if their drawing too much attentions
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...how did you do it, actually? I'd love to know for my arts.
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Its actually just a slightly tweaked version of the Difference Clouds Lightning creation method (white layer, render>clouds, render>difference clouds, invert colors, move midtone level to far right, colorize the hue as required) where I add some extra lines to control the lightning direction slightly and working highlights to get it pop a little more.
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Mmm, it does work better all lines up in one, interesting that her panties shredded away but her shorts remained...
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Well, we only see the front ruined, could be a lot more hidden by her new cut-offs...
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yeah, HER shorts don't fit afterwards XD that's how it's meant to be
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Certainly a novel way to turn some jeans into cut-offs
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What exactly did FMM request, a comic sequence, or just a one-shot?
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Jut TF, though most opted for comics. I just pared my down to this and still ran out of time.
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Still looks fine if you ask me.
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More delays in getting it were the problem
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How is this a failure? It looks pretty good to me. Her overall pose doesn't change a lot but the concept and muscles on her are solid
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Its more the fact it was meant to be done in 2009 and what year is it?
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Oh.... oh... oh. Well, it's done now
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The lack of movement was also intentional, trying to a noticeable progression with the arms rising up
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