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Published: 2004-12-23 13:21:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 6511; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 809
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My Lemon test ad. The first major account for Liquidmedia (my advertising outfit) We are going to kick ad.Concept 02
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Comments: 21
Overall it's very nice. Nice colour scheme, good layout. However, if your message is promoting your "My Lemon" you should have used a Lemon and not a lime.
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So true... thanks for the comment. I plum forgot about this ad.
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i looked at both concepts and i prefer this one!! its a great ad!
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Very clean cut and straight, I like it...
Good luck for your advertising firm.
Cheers, Cliff.
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(whoops... pressed Submit too soon...)
But this is definitely better than the first one. 
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uhm...
First thoughts:
What season?
The glass is pretty still for such shaken liquid... Maybe tip the glass a bit...?
Is that a lemon, or a lime?
Needs more emphasis (but only slight) on the "my taste. my style. my lemon!" And maybe a more zesty font.
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Absolut Lemon?
I really love this one too... but 'Absolut Lemon' is what eveyone's gonna think of when they see this ad, not 'my lemon'
I don't see very much of originality in this one.
hope I don't sound too mean, I'm an architecture student, that means I'm used to honest critisism
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thanks for the critical analysis... the message that i am trying to convey is that to add My Lemon to your next drink, instead of say, Sprite or 7up. I cant show a bottle, then the message would be lost. But these are just concepts, there is a lot of room for improvement.
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This is definitely one that would catch my eye.
M-
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... hmmm... remembered me a cup of caipirinha... (lemon, aguardente of sugar cane, sugar and ice). Excellent concept and graphical result.
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'chase with the best'.
bravo!
--mary.
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This one is the best.
And I have a thing for lemon... so er...
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I like this one better than the other two. A keeper.
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very cool !.. simple..crisp..effective !.. nice work my man !
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