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Cyryn — Desecrate This [NSFW]
Published: 2009-06-29 20:15:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 17; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description It may be a stretch
but you're full of bullshit.
I don't know when
they replaced your vitals,
but this is then end of it.

I don't remember
laughter's resonating.
All that I recall
was its desecrating.
From the tide
to all you've done;
you've left me inside
a place dark enough
I could almost belong.

I'd bang your head
like the violet drummer's war.
Hammering out the dying heat
louder than any had
ever known before.

I don't remember,
laughter's resonating.
All that I recall
was its desecrating.
From the ebony flow
to the parts unknown;
you left me inside
a place dark enough
I could almost belong.

When now the stretch
is nothing but a memory.
Glimmering deep inside
the tissue you keep
hidden from your history.

I don't remember
laughter's resonating.
All that I recall
was its desecrating.
From the Hell below,
to the Heaven you sold;
You left me inside
a place dark enough
to keep even my heart cold.
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Comments: 3

Ashiato [2009-06-30 01:10:04 +0000 UTC]

I like this. It captures raw and personal emotion without sounding formless. And the structure matches the emotion. Well done.

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Cyryn In reply to Ashiato [2009-06-30 06:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you. I'm not sure this style will be showing up again any time soon but I'm glad that it did a good job of conveying the message.

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Ashiato In reply to Cyryn [2009-06-30 13:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's nice to read at least this once!

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