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Cyvine — Gem OC Commission: Opal

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Published: 2015-07-16 16:50:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 5476; Favourites: 176; Downloads: 11
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(she is floating in midair and her weapon is a fighting fan)
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HaleyC7995 [2016-05-26 01:24:22 +0000 UTC]

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Nice work! But there's already a fusion named Opal when Pearl and Amethyst fuse together. If it's a separate crystal gem, that'll be kinda different. Anyway, nice coloring and style. I would suggest colliding the colors on the gem together to make is more interesting and unique. And also nicely one on the dress, which brings out the Asian culture and spirituality, plus making her look like the goddess of spring. I love the blossoms on her hair because it brings out the beauty within her, and makes her more elegant in her way. Awesome job on her, Cyvine! Pretty!

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Cyvine In reply to HaleyC7995 [2016-05-26 12:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique, I appreciate it, even though I think I've improved my art already a bit (no wonder this is in the folder named "Old stuff") And yes, I know there is already an Opal, but the commissioner told me to draw one.

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HaleyC7995 In reply to Cyvine [2016-05-26 17:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay.

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Cyvine In reply to HaleyC7995 [2016-05-26 20:24:48 +0000 UTC]

I still appreciate the critique, don't worry about it ^^

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HaleyC7995 In reply to Cyvine [2016-05-27 00:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Okay. You're welcome.

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RKMADIS0N800 In reply to HaleyC7995 [2016-11-08 22:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Who cares if its the same gem as canon, it's been hinted at that there are MULTIPLE types of the same gems on homeworld, even the same gems as fusions, so there could be single opals on homeworld even if their not fusions, i still think the rest of your critique is fair though, i'm just sick of people telling artist that gems like Opal, Sugilite and sardonyx's are already in the show and cannot be created by artist in their own way.

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HaleyC7995 In reply to RKMADIS0N800 [2016-11-09 00:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah true. I can't argue about that. I do know that there are different kinds of the same gem. Thanks for your opinion.

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RKMADIS0N800 In reply to HaleyC7995 [2016-11-09 02:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, thanks, and sorry if my opinion was a little harsh, i'm just mad that artist can't make their own "canon" gems without getting told of by people, not saying that YOU were doing that of course, at least you showed your opinion in a very friendly way, unlike SOME people in the SU community.

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HaleyC7995 In reply to RKMADIS0N800 [2016-11-09 17:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Well I try to the best I can anyway.

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RKMADIS0N800 In reply to HaleyC7995 [2016-11-09 19:46:13 +0000 UTC]

k

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HaleyC7995 In reply to RKMADIS0N800 [2016-11-09 21:22:46 +0000 UTC]

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RKMADIS0N800 In reply to HaleyC7995 [2016-11-09 21:28:11 +0000 UTC]

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HaleyC7995 In reply to RKMADIS0N800 [2016-11-09 21:31:06 +0000 UTC]

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MultipleFandomLover [2015-07-16 17:39:54 +0000 UTC]

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She looks, just like Iolite, very original and she reflects much of her personality. Her weapon and her design looks very gorgeous and graceful, I would guess she's a graceful fighter almost like Pearl. Her colors look very nice and really do clash with her Gem, and I have to say that I love the way her hair looks with the flowers in it. She looks very much like she could be a plush, the natural show style you give your OCs is very impressive. And the way her dress just flows like Sapphire's is beautiful, as well are the smaller details such as the stars and the outlines along it, beautiful job!

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SuperMarioFan65 [2016-12-04 05:54:20 +0000 UTC]

She's look so pretty ^^

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Imawerecat [2016-01-16 02:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Dat fan doh

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Concepts-by-Kae [2015-07-16 19:05:27 +0000 UTC]

My goodness, she's *lovely*.

I love the design, the pastel colors, her serene expression.

I really like her.

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Cyvine In reply to Concepts-by-Kae [2015-07-16 19:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Thaaank you!

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silent-hiII [2015-07-16 17:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Omg she looks so pretty ;A;
I really like how the Dress came out and a Fan as Weapon
Thank you very much, I really love her <33
I send the Points now! :3

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Concepts-by-Kae In reply to silent-hiII [2015-07-16 19:06:09 +0000 UTC]

I really love your Opal's design! She's so lovely~!

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silent-hiII In reply to Concepts-by-Kae [2015-07-16 19:12:46 +0000 UTC]

Indeed I also really like how she turned out^^

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Cyvine In reply to silent-hiII [2015-07-16 17:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the nice words and the points!
When you said you wanted japanese clothes, the first thing that came to my mind as a weapon was a fan. So I made a research in Google and found out that fighting fans really do exist OwO
Feel free to commish me anytime

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Trassh [2015-07-16 16:57:27 +0000 UTC]

She's so pretty ; o ;

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Cyvine In reply to Trassh [2015-07-16 17:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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