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D-A-Skelly — Attraction! by-nc-nd
Published: 2012-08-31 08:10:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Description I believe opposites attract, explosive kiss.


2012 Delice1941
31st August2012
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Comments: 7

3wyl [2012-09-10 17:57:20 +0000 UTC]

I like how you've included the descriptive word there before 'kiss' to emphasise what would happen first, like. Or rather, when I read 'opposites attract', I do think of something along the lines of 'explosive' stuff... and then kiss following that, though the two go hand in hand, I guess.

The phrasing is lovely and the way you've set it out is great too. Really good ending there!

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D-A-Skelly In reply to 3wyl [2012-09-11 09:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Pleased you enjoyed this story. Did have alternate endings. Either electrifying kiss, or dynamite kiss. In the end I went for explosive kiss.

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3wyl In reply to D-A-Skelly [2012-09-11 14:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah, understandable!

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Exnihilo-nihil [2012-09-01 11:02:45 +0000 UTC]

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D-A-Skelly In reply to Exnihilo-nihil [2012-09-01 11:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Am smiling at your avatar, lightning and kiss: appropriate.

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DragonsChest [2012-08-31 21:28:01 +0000 UTC]

I believe that too...

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D-A-Skelly In reply to DragonsChest [2012-09-01 10:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Makes for a lively lifestyle.

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