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aldwarke [2012-09-22 12:26:39 +0000 UTC]
I love this. The French version adds spice. Have you tried an acrostic poem? I'm working on one - unsuccessfully at the moment.
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D-A-Skelly In reply to DragonsChest [2012-09-22 08:38:58 +0000 UTC]
Did not bother with syllable count on this one just kept it short. Like how English/French words are so often similar.
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D-A-Skelly In reply to Exnihilo-nihil [2012-09-21 16:46:52 +0000 UTC]
Wordeea helped with middle line in French verse, I had tourment mémoire
which sounds clumsy, "mémoire tourmentée perfect.
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wordeea [2012-09-21 15:29:25 +0000 UTC]
very true. the brain is a funny place
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D-A-Skelly In reply to wordeea [2012-09-21 15:52:20 +0000 UTC]
Was trying to keep this as short as possible, better chance of getting French translation right, does it work?
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D-A-Skelly In reply to wordeea [2012-09-21 16:14:22 +0000 UTC]
Yes, even to just read it looks better. Thank you!
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