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Published: 2016-02-28 09:08:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 489; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 2
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Description This piece was inspired by my girlfriend, as I was thinking of her the entire time I was drawing this, And of course, undertale
I tried something completely different, and boy did it pay off.
Total amount of time this took: 5 Hours.


Im gonna start digital drawing like this from now on (Unless animating).

Please do not use without my permission! Thanks   
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Comments: 3

LegionError121 [2016-02-28 13:12:54 +0000 UTC]

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So :3 This appears to be one of many interatations of Frisk (and not Chara I presume):3

The one thing I must definitly credit you on is how you've made her (I'm pretty sure Frisk is a girl) hair "big" :3 Relative to the original sprite work :3 I think this is probably the closest someone has drawn Frisk relative to her Original scale without making her look creepy :3

For the most Part the shading and lighting are very good :3 Though everything looks very individual :3 You've also managed to keep using the same kinds of colours consitently which always a plus :3

Though it's probably not considered as important as Frisk, you've also done a nice job of making the heart/soul look detailled :3 You can tell you've spent at least 40 minutes alone on it :3

Only down side is the lighting goes a bit funny around the Glow of the Soul :3 Not how detailed it is but how parts of frisks clothing hasn't quite been "lit up properly" as there's a lot of dark areas that have been made crimson red when there should probably be more of a light pink :3

Overall I would give this a 8/10 :3

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D-J-A-Y In reply to LegionError121 [2016-02-28 17:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your critique, as usual!

My main concern on this piece, was just trying out a new way of drawing, and coloring. To be honest I have been very disappointed on how drawings were turning out before, but now i am content, and this is probably how i am going to be coloring and drawing from now on. 

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LegionError121 In reply to D-J-A-Y [2016-02-28 21:39:39 +0000 UTC]

I would say while this style is great :3 you shouldn't forget about how you did it before, I would suggest trying to bridge the styles together as this style is realisticly unsuitable for animation in the long run and your other style can be a bit too simple at times :3 I think the compromise would be good :3

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