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Published: 2013-06-06 13:51:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1323; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 19
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Description The flickering lights from lightbulbs way past their lifetime twisted the shadows, making them look alive and ready to attack.

"I don't like this one bit..." Shank said under his breath. "There's a reason these metro tunnels are abandoned."

There was a cracking noise behind them, but as Shank turned around, nothing was there. He dismissed it with a shake of his head.

"Well, since somepony thought it to be a good idea to shoot up a hostage, and a town's doctor for that matter, we have to find someplace else with a roof above our heads.
I don't know about you, rough guy, but I don't want to be woken by some overambitious scorpions."

The crackling sound of exposed wires and the dripping of leaking pipes formed an abstract ambient sound, only occasionally interrupted by that cracking sound Shank heard before.
But everytime he turned around to check, nothing was in sight. He grew nervous. This place was getting to him. And what's worse was, that Vignette didn't seem bothered at all by their surroundings.
Shank drew his SMG.

"Just in case...", he said, as Vignette shot him a curious glance

"What's wrong?", Vignette asked the Unicorn. "You've never looked so distraught these past few days."

"This place feels wrong. Out in the open I can see them coming, but here are so many nooks and crannies...these tunnels are claustrophobic."

"Well, your rifle won't do us any good here, I'll give you that. But other than that I think you're overreacting a bit."

*Crack*

"Did you hear that, too?"

"I may not be as perceptive as you, but I'm fairly certain that-"

*Crack*

"There! There it was again!"

"Okay, this time I heard it, too. So what? Some cracking noise, big deal. Probably just some wet fuse box. This place is soaked from all those leaking pipes..."

"No this wasn't a fuse box. This sounded different. Almost like...claws on concrete."

The shadows distorted the walls, and for a fraction of a second, Shank thought he saw a pair of eyes, before they vanished in the shadows.

"Vignette?"

"Yes?"

"We are being watched."

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Well, it certainly has been some time. Storm had to sort some things out, so I was kindly asked/forced at gunpoint to make this next part of our tennis. But the next is up to you, Stormbadger!


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Comments: 16

Texas-Doughnut [2013-06-24 07:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... i guess this magic effect is made in some kind of photoshop or something right?
If not, TELL ME WHERE DID YOU GET THIS PARTICLE EFFECT PLS!

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d0ntst0pme In reply to Texas-Doughnut [2013-06-24 10:02:10 +0000 UTC]

gimp

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Texas-Doughnut In reply to d0ntst0pme [2013-06-24 10:02:52 +0000 UTC]

damn...

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Somethingguy912 [2013-06-08 00:42:39 +0000 UTC]

let's go to the Dunwich Building....

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d0ntst0pme In reply to Somethingguy912 [2013-06-08 09:55:06 +0000 UTC]

We don't go there anymore...

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Somethingguy912 In reply to d0ntst0pme [2013-06-08 18:03:53 +0000 UTC]

but I want that endurance bobblehead!

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d0ntst0pme In reply to Somethingguy912 [2013-06-09 18:31:24 +0000 UTC]

It's not worth it...

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Somethingguy912 In reply to d0ntst0pme [2013-06-09 22:31:05 +0000 UTC]

hehe yeah.

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Stormbadger [2013-06-07 16:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully I can get out of this BLOODY ANNOYING block and do something with this.

Still, your writing's good and the picture looks great, as usual.

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d0ntst0pme In reply to Stormbadger [2013-06-07 17:58:59 +0000 UTC]

This should indeed give some opportunities to continue.

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REDBLUTEAM [2013-06-06 19:36:59 +0000 UTC]

You know I never really cared for fall-out, but I really love the way you write.

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d0ntst0pme In reply to REDBLUTEAM [2013-06-06 20:36:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm mediocre at best when it comes to writing

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REDBLUTEAM In reply to d0ntst0pme [2013-06-06 20:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Really? Well my strong point has always been writing and history.

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Dr-GUNHaMMER [2013-06-06 19:02:08 +0000 UTC]

dat lighting effect

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DaChazSter [2013-06-06 18:38:51 +0000 UTC]

It would be even more awesome if my OC was in it. But it's still pretty cool.

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Sirhardcoreelite [2013-06-06 14:15:20 +0000 UTC]

C: Sexy... still want to join... but Sexy non the less

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