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Published: 2013-01-08 00:06:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1055; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 38
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Homework 4 School
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This is amazing, I hope your school teachers appreciate it! The background looks slightly off to me though, like it's slightly too washed out, however that does draw the eyes more to the craft. However I don't think that adding slightly more detail and a greater range of values in the background would detract from this terribly, yet it would make the scene look more believable. The angle of the craft looks a bit odd too, like it has just come from where the building is? Don't know quite what's going on - I have a few ideas but I'm not certain. Also I feel like you went slightly overboard with the blue lighting effect on the ship - it's good but there's slightly too much for a forrest scene? Also I hope this doesn't come across as too harsh, I've only bothered to pick up on the stuff which doesn't look right to me, rather than commenting on everything - (basically anything I havent commented on is perfect in my mind so don't be sad!) I hope this helps a bit!
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thx 4 the critique
I completly know what u mean.. ^^
was a bit late last night and it's just about 6h of work, so it's more like a speedy, had to "finish" it fast and was a bit lazy ^^
however I reduced the background blur and also the blue lighting.. maybe next week I find more time to redo some parts
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Cool, I guessed it was a speedy, but I wasn't sure. It looks much better for the changes and hopefully you'll get some time, but if not it's still a great concept and I look forward to seeing what you do next
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That spaceship looks awesome-- everything looks awesome
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lad'n doch mal hoch, will auch gugn
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