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Dahnza — Revenge
Published: 2008-12-04 23:55:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description Burning flames ignite you as the pressure builds within,
Your soul it will burn through, through your soul from your skin,
My blackened heart enjoys the picture of your peril at my hands,
My distaste for you a fixture, for you, I've many plans,

You destroyed my life like it meant nothing to the earth,
Treated me like i was worthless, just another piece of dirt,
I'll enjoy the look of your face as it cringes in being damned
My distaste for you a fixture, for you, I've many plans,

I've sought you out from every far reach of the world,
To unleash my rage on you, as my knowledge thus unfurled,
I found it was you who ordered my family to be lambed,
My distaste for you a fixture, for you, I've many plans,

All this in theory was my most gleeful outlook on life,
But I've found over the years, the pain just becomes more rife,
That's why I've decided my revenge isn't where i stand,
My distaste for you was a fixture, for you I've had many plans,
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Dahnza [2008-12-29 10:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much was the message. This was another Poem i needed to finish. Tie up some loose ends. I cant stand unfinished poems in my notepad (where i write them) so i just did my best. It's a challenge for me, and the more i do it, even though they may not be the best, the more i learn from them and can get better outside of my comfort zone.

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BlightOwl [2008-12-27 07:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Interesting message (er, at least, the one I see ). The whole idea of "revenge is for the weak, only the strong can resist the temptation to seek it, etc."; a lot of people could learn from that.

If that's not what you were going for in this, erm... woops :'D

Still ed of course.

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Dahnza [2008-12-04 23:56:30 +0000 UTC]

whoopee that bold had more of an effect than i anticipated.

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