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Published: 2012-01-26 03:03:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 736; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 5
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Description Aurelie will drive him insane....without even trying. but Jervis thinks she makes a wonderful doormouse.
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Amandasans [2012-04-01 03:32:08 +0000 UTC]

.... Crane's epic fail

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Danielle-chan In reply to Amandasans [2012-04-01 14:15:20 +0000 UTC]

Yep. >_>

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miz-inthesky [2012-01-26 13:03:38 +0000 UTC]

she is so adroable i wrote auriele in the second chapter of my fan fic im working on but unforcuantly my beta hasnt gotten back to me abot the first chapter and its been 8 days im not sure if she's even working on it she hasnt replyied to my comment , im not sure waht to do

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Danielle-chan In reply to miz-inthesky [2012-01-26 13:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I can beta it if you need me to. I have fairly decent grammar. >_>

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miz-inthesky In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-26 19:57:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks i will give her a little more time its not that i dont belive u bt i dont like the idear of you seeing my work when its raw and very badly writen i like your wrigthing alot and i know mine could never be as good and i consider u to be a good firend, i use cause she an inpartial veiwer and where not that close but i migth have to take u , up on that offer

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Danielle-chan In reply to miz-inthesky [2012-01-26 20:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah, understandable. And wow...to have someone say I'm a good writer is well...:dies: And you aren't a bad writer.

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miz-inthesky In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-26 20:26:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks but im not that good being dsylexic dosnt help and ive been i'll for the last week so my writeing of abit im wrigth the second chapter of her story its about 3/4ths the way throug and 4500 words it's still got a bit of a way to go yet its like the longest chaper ive ever writen espicaly since i only ussaly write small chapters

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Danielle-chan In reply to miz-inthesky [2012-01-26 23:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Hope you feel better and honestly the fact that you write even with being dislexic. And you do a good job Trust me.

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miz-inthesky In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-27 12:08:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks and me too ive stared chapter 3 i had to cut chapter 2 down it was too long

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Danielle-chan In reply to miz-inthesky [2012-01-27 18:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, I saw you put the first chapter up, I'll read it when I get home tonight!

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miz-inthesky In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-27 18:59:49 +0000 UTC]

cool its was just a quick chapter cause i hadnt played much of the game also i sent the secnd away to be betad so i will put that up when its done

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theorangecrow [2012-01-26 12:32:40 +0000 UTC]

XD awww

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Danielle-chan In reply to theorangecrow [2012-01-26 13:40:03 +0000 UTC]

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Lilacatz [2012-01-26 04:39:39 +0000 UTC]

XDD Awesome.

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Danielle-chan In reply to Lilacatz [2012-01-26 13:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes. XD Aurelie kills her enemies with kindness. XD

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Lilacatz In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-26 23:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Or Innocent foolishness. Makes me think of Spongebob.

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Danielle-chan In reply to Lilacatz [2012-01-27 00:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Really, she's good at seeming obvlivious. >_>

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Lilacatz In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-27 01:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Yup. I love that about her.

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Danielle-chan In reply to Lilacatz [2012-01-27 02:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Glad that it is a good thing.

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Lilacatz In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-27 02:16:03 +0000 UTC]

XD Yup. .

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DestinyDecade [2012-01-26 03:05:48 +0000 UTC]

This is cute here.

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Danielle-chan In reply to DestinyDecade [2012-01-26 13:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Thankies!

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DestinyDecade In reply to Danielle-chan [2012-01-26 18:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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