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nIikUrA-kAiTo [2011-06-25 12:01:48 +0000 UTC]
This drawing is really nice. I don't see any mistakes, the composition is nice and I love the idea.
However, I think you could work at the shading. The colour sheme is pretty good, but it looks a bit flat, not 3D, you know what I mean? There could be some more shades at her face, like you already did it at her cloth. You should always try to use every tone from pitch black to a bright white. Yet this is just my opinion and even without this shading it doesn't look bad.
Good job! Keep it up~ β₯
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YaensArt [2011-06-25 11:01:07 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful eyes. I like that they arer the only colored spot in the picture.
Some more shading in the face would have been good though. You can barely see her nose.
The clothes again are really great. You're good at that, keep it up.
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Danielle-SS In reply to YaensArt [2011-06-25 11:03:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot! I saw there was a shading problem only after I submited it...
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xenokurisu [2011-06-25 10:58:58 +0000 UTC]
I love those eyesβ₯
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Danielle-SS In reply to Elle-Madame [2011-06-23 08:27:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks. I'm glad you like it! :*
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