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Danni-Stone — Choose Your Own Romance Pg 13
Published: 2010-12-12 03:03:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1214; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Hi all! Well, it took me a tad bit longer than I intended, but here is page 13! Rom gettin' all heroic!
I felt it was best to leave out sound effects here, I'd like to leave the sounds and mood to you guys. I hope that's not a bad move. I just wanted to explain that since I didn't want anyone to think it's unfinished or forbid you think I'm being lazy lol I know I have to work on my water effects, but that will be ongoing, I did the best I could with what skill I have it now (yah I see myself lookin' up some tutorials in the future lol).Anyhow, I hope you guys enjoy! Please let me know what you think of the story so far, the good, the bad, and even the ugly! I'm doing this because I'm having fun, but don't hesitate to let me know what you guys are thinking too, even if you feel that it's taking too long between pages, anything
All right, well until next time you guys take care! ^_^
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It's been so long that I forgot which page I had seen last ;__; . I read the whole thing over again to bring myself up to scratch and once more felt thoroughly entertained by the whole quartet.
Both Ella and Julie look like dah bomb on that party. Especially Julie has got a pretty dress and 'do', it's a shame Louie never got to see her in her glory before she got thrown into the pool. Then again, he's already said he thought her pretty, so he doesn't need to see her in a dress anyway.
So Julie apparently can't swim and Romeo is coming to the rescue. I like him better and better, he's a goofy, nice person underneath his douchebaggy facade. I didn't suspect him to be so mindful of what his little stepsister is doing. He is the one who went looking for her, not *gasp* Louie! Shame on you, nerdboy! Playing Twister instead of seeking out your lovely lady, my foot.
Drawing these underwater panels can't have been easy, but you've done a wonderful job. The character's poses and clothing look floaty and I can see Romeo struggling to get back to the surface. I also like how he squints in the middle panel!
I'm looking forward to what's going to happen next, how Rome is going to react, whether Louie will hear about this and how Julie is going to look without glasses. They have been covering most of her face, so I'd like to see how she really looks like.
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Ah! I'm SO sorry I didn't reply to you sooner. I kept telling myself as SOON as I got done with Page 14 I would, because I kept meaning to finish LONG before today! I'm so glad you came back and took a look and still enjoy the story
I really wanted to have fun with the characters and try to show some more personality through their wardrobe change (and it's just fun to draw them in different clothing too haha). The girls yeah, I wanted both to be dressed us, because again, I have a lot of fun drawing pretty people and they both want to look good for their men!
Lol, I love your descriptions of the guys, I'm really glad you see them as I do! ^^ It's really nice to know that people see the depth in them that I'm trying to convey. Arguably, Will is more of a d-bag than Rom since Rom tends to hide his feelings while Will doesn't.
The underwater panels were definitely a challenge, but a fun one. Since there wasn't dialogue I wanted them to look as nice and realistic as possible and hopefully capture some nice drama!
Well I look forward to what you'll think of the next page too! ^_^ I really enjoy reading your critiques!
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A damsel in distress, sinking to the dark depths of a pool. This looks like a job for.... SUPER ROM! Okay i'm gonna go back to my corner before people start throwing shoes at me...
Nice work by the way.
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Lol, yeah, Super Rom...haha, that would be funny if I did some fanart of that...hrmm...
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Great job on completing this one too, my friend! I really do like the angle of the figure in the first panel! Really dynamic and eye-catching! I also like the glasses on the side which seems to emphasize the fall! The second one has a nice flow to it which seems to illustrate the underwater atmosphere that I'm sure you were going for! And yay for Rom for saving the fair damsel in distress! As always, nice line work too! 
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Thanks a lot for taking a look Kat, I really appreciate it
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