Comments: 9
Kissasheep [2017-03-07 05:35:27 +0000 UTC]
9 out of 11
Gud, but has some small flaws
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DannyD1997 In reply to Kissasheep [2017-03-07 05:38:01 +0000 UTC]
Like what? I know it's not perfect, it's just that this is the best I can.
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cyngawolf In reply to DannyD1997 [2017-05-28 07:28:15 +0000 UTC]
Here, let me help:
The flaws I think Kissasheep is seeing are very minor and easy to fix with practice.
Fair warning: CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AHEAD
One of the biggest flaws I see is that you seemed to have used an abundance of circle and line tools for your outlines. Circle and line tools can be great for helping you plan out to proportions and shapes, but they should almost never be used as the final outline. Having an outline using those tools generally results with the finished character looking unnatural and stiff.
Harvey's head is too small, he is known for having a large head to body ratio.
His beak is also way too low...It is literally supposed to be in between his eyes (even I have made that mistake in my past drawings)
For the most part his proportions are off in general, Harvey has a large head and a short small body.
I think what you need to work on the most is proportions, and trust me when I say that I know exactly how hard it is to get right. Proportions are my biggest weakness other than angle perspectives.
Otherwise, this is a very nice drawing and I hope you keep up the good work and improvement! Everyone has room to improve...Even me....
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DannyD1997 In reply to cyngawolf [2017-05-28 13:44:20 +0000 UTC]
I wanted to give him a larger head. I just did my best.
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SmashGamer16 [2016-10-08 01:31:15 +0000 UTC]
Very good!
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