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Axlwisp [2014-02-03 00:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Ooo nice :3

Crit time!

To start with the actual crit, I feel her right hand (the one on the ground) is much larger than the left, and the fact that it's not flat on the ground keeps sticking out to me. Her left hand may just be too small, but I feel it has longer fingers than her right hand despite its smaller size, which may be why I feel it looks odd. Minor crit though.

Also agree with worm about the traditional medium, though props to you for drawing traditionally in the first place. Your art looks good as is so it's not a pressing concern, but if you don't feel like trying to draw digitally, I would at least consider adding some semblance of a background to the piece. A simple background never really hurts as it gives more flavour and personality to the piece, as long as it's not too distracting. I really think this piece in particular would benefit from being set in a field or pasture of some sort. Plus, it would give us some grounding as to where she resides spatially, especially her right hand.

All that aside, this is very impressive for a traditional work. Her outfit is nicely constructed and designed, and you really do an excellent job with her curves. I see some odd thick lines at the back of her torso and under her right arm, but they don't do any harm. 

Her expression is excellent too, so major kudos to you. Overall you've done great. The pose is natural and the girl is cuuute~ :3

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Dr--Worm [2014-02-01 23:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Okay so, crit-wise, there's really not much wrong with this piece, it's pretty solid. The only thing that stuck out to me was the hand she's leaning on. It's a little malformed, with her fingers all being really stubby and the hand in general just being a little small. Also, I made her leg a little longer, and made it so the thigh curves down more into her ankles. Here's the redline: imgur.com/RbHD2j6

Honestly, I think the traditional medium you're using is holding you back. Your lines and colors would be so much more striking if they had been done digitally. I suggest you invest in a cheap tablet, it's worth it. 

All in all, good job.

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sexyfacialhair [2014-01-31 23:16:52 +0000 UTC]

*your

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sexyfacialhair [2014-01-31 23:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Excellent! I agree with the Dr--Worm, you'd do amazing things with a tablet. But you're hand drawn work is great.

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Dr--Worm [2014-01-31 17:47:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna come back to crit this later in the name of glorious mother tummycrit, but I just wanted to say that I really like this dude.

Fantastic job~! You oughta' get a tablet one of these day though, I think it'd help you a lot.

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Rufinomarx [2014-01-31 08:33:31 +0000 UTC]

What a cow.

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MentalCrash [2014-01-30 18:38:08 +0000 UTC]

Moo Gusta, sipi sipi 030

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