Reefstiz [2003-12-17 00:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Ok. First of all. I suggest that you downsize it a bit. A little art and a lot of white, especially the bluish stuff on the side doesn't work unless it is a special deviation. Send it to me if you need some touching up on Paint Shop Pro 7. Second. Nice drawing, but it belongs in a comic. Next. Try to get some plain white paper. The lines are distracting. I know this is one of your first. But without the constructive critisism, it won't work. Kepp it up Robin! PS: The highlighting in ink is perfect.
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