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Published: 2010-10-23 23:38:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1232; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 18
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Description I think i did really good on this She looks a little mouse like but oh well. I made her eyes green like the cover of The Fourth Apprentice, but i have seen them yellow and amber colored in other pictures.... too late to change it now XD
Please tell me honestly what you think about it, i can't get better unless you help me.

Yep i added a dove in the background
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Comments: 15

XxdovesongxX [2010-10-30 07:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Looks cute, and I'm not saying you need to urgently change it, but never ever trust cover art. The guy who makes them always screws up the character appearances. Like a green eyed Brambleclaw, ginger and white Ivypaw, etc etc. I think her eyes are blue, because in TFA they described her with ''brilliant golden eyes'' (adorable! I want them to stay this way), but then, sadly, in FE it was stated in the allegiances that her eyes are blue, and she was described with them in this book, too. So they're likely blue. I will always imagine her with golden eyes, however. So cute and unique.

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darkangel1236 In reply to XxdovesongxX [2010-10-30 17:57:52 +0000 UTC]

so basically it could be green, gold or blue

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XxdovesongxX In reply to darkangel1236 [2010-10-30 21:10:33 +0000 UTC]

It couldn't be green, because her eyes were never described that way in the book. But yes, it could be gold or blue.

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darkangel1236 In reply to XxdovesongxX [2010-10-30 21:22:03 +0000 UTC]

everyone pictures the cats differently
yeah i think gold would be pretty, maybe gold with flecks of green

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XxdovesongxX In reply to darkangel1236 [2010-10-30 22:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I have a character with eyes like that. What makes it even weirder is that her name is, well . . . Doveflight. They're actually the other way around, darkish green with light golden flecks in them.

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darkangel1236 In reply to XxdovesongxX [2010-10-31 00:26:13 +0000 UTC]

cool ^^

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runningfern [2010-10-29 17:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Aww, this is really lovely I love her fuzzy bit of fur and the glow-y river

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darkangel1236 In reply to runningfern [2010-10-29 20:02:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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kimmiesh123 [2010-10-24 14:59:39 +0000 UTC]

SHE'S SOOOOOO CUTE!!!!

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darkangel1236 In reply to kimmiesh123 [2010-10-24 16:55:48 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks

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kimmiesh123 In reply to darkangel1236 [2010-10-24 18:13:14 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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AmusedMilk [2010-10-23 23:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Alright! I honestly think its pretty good. What program do you use?

I do agree that Dovepaw here looks somewhat mouselike... I made these redlines, perhaps it will help you see how to make it less mouse like...: [link] ... I hope it helps! (:

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darkangel1236 In reply to AmusedMilk [2010-10-24 00:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you i used gimp

Yeah thought so, and thanks it does help
Her forehead needs to slope upward more, and needs to make head wider.

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AmusedMilk In reply to darkangel1236 [2010-10-24 14:24:14 +0000 UTC]

yeah good luck with future drawings!!

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darkangel1236 In reply to AmusedMilk [2010-10-24 16:55:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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