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Published: 2008-12-02 02:03:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 502; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Commission forthis is what i got so far >D it is going to be colored traditionally annnddd by color pencils @_@ this will be crazy fun XD
drawn on bristol, Skiri, tell me if there's anything you want changed -its the only reason i haven't inked it yet,- i want to make sure its how you want it before i go and screw it up by inking it XD that is, if i did screw up anywhere..... -ahem-
enjoy the WIP i've got some more stuff i wanna post up that i'm gonna work on until i can get some time to finish this commission and one other one for ^^
Character(c) ~Skiri-ki
art(c) me
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Comments: 33
looks really cool so far..
couple things need fixed..
but thats it..
cant wait to see what it looks like when you finish it..
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yeah xD i'll get them fixed sooner or later<3
thanks for loookin i'll try and make it worthwhile
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kay..
nd welcome..
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Wh00t!?
Crazy shit this is amazing XD
Love the pose and I think it fits him well, looking a bit hit or thrown back but willing to return it...
Can feel the wind as well, I'm just trying to decide whether that's leaves or petals... (nope I haven't read a shojo lately >.< ) but I guess color will banish the doubts XD
Probably the most striking part for me is seeing things worked into his design I planned out for him somewhat into the story like the ... bandages? dunno how to call them but he was gonna get some sort of gloves to prevent him from cutting his palms with some wind magic techniques. Getting him to wear some more than just a T was step two, seeing as the story starts in late autumn and *spoilers* ...
omg I was gonna go for something simpler but now I just want to mess with his design some more XD
Personally I can't see any bugs in the proportions but then again I'm just starting to get a grasp on them and it's all bones still...
Sooo why "YES you can" ink it XD
(sry couldn't help it
Looking forward to seeing it done
(Also: sry for being lame on responding, I hardly logged on here for a week or two now and it's pure chance I spotted it in my inbox before it would have been pushed back further.(omg it's all cluttered with deviations and journals oO))
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oh sweet xD i'm really glad you like it, haha and glad i could help inspire more outfit? XD
yes, those ARE leaves not petals LOL no need to worry about that,
my friend pointed out that his leg looks awkward and it does to me too so i'm gonna play with that leg before i ink it
as for late to responding, you didn't take all that long xD i only posted it yesterday so you're fine.
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Yeah I still have to learn a lot when it comes to drawing and character-design(the visual parts) proves to be hardest for me somehow... so inspiration is part of what I need XD
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Oh wow I love the feel of this picture 8D
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Wow. The folds and perspective are amazing! It looks awesome! Great sketch!
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thanks ^^ i'm still practicing both of them so i'm glad you like it
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actually, the preportions look spot on, perspective wise.
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really? o3o you sure his legs don't need to be thinner? cuz i tend to do that a lot. i make the characters legs WAYYY too thick, especially when drawing them from angles..... XD;
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thanks
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i love how itz lookin! one thing tho, his hands area bit off to me
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-tilts head- i don't see where they're wrong, xD i never get hands perfect though so i'm gonna just keep them how they are and try fixing his body more >_> xD thanks for the input though. if i see something i can change easily on the hands i'll try it.
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XD ok, and sorry... maybe its just cuz im used to different style hands or something...
but i dont see anything on the body that needs any editing!!
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lol perhaps, 
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This is sweet so far. The gesture is very actiony. Looking forward to seeing the finished version
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thanks
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Ohhhh, it's looking bitchin so far. A few things worth fixing, though:
His waist looks like it tapers waay too much in the middle. D8 He needs to be thickened a bit.
It looks like you were trying to make one leg look closer to the camera, and the other farther away but the perspective seems odd. It so far looks like his hips and waist are just too big, so unfortunately it might need to be messed around with. 
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yeah i suck at doing leg perspective.. Dl its like, impossible to make it look right y'know? -sigh-
i'll see about fixing the waist but i don't know how well i'll be able to @_@
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because i like how i drew the waist XD haha unless we're talking about where his pants are.... then yeeesss i do need to fix that don't i....
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No, I'm talking about where the waist reaches it's bending point, it's waaaay too thin there.
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xD thats cuz it was just supposed to be a side view when i drew it. i'm just gonna have to fix the legs altogether then
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No, even for a side view it's too thin. DX
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thanks XD the first version didn't look quite as.... interesting, so i had to change it 83 i like this much better ^^
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