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Published: 2007-09-04 20:20:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 42220; Favourites: 345; Downloads: 86
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Love is lustingLove is trusting
Love is thrusting.
Minus two
if you do-
But know
that Sex
is a vex;
A curse
for the worse.
A voice
without choice.
Indeed,
to lope
and cope.
Pulling the pieces
Through nephews and nieces.
Making mingle
be single.
Singular-
Like the word unheard.
But those
who speak
are weak.
Just fuck
and with luck -
The Sun
will shine
Devine.
But those who care
will spare;
Those who live
will give.
But what is life
without Sex?
A goddamn vex.
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Comments: 45
love is thrusting,
love is gushing.
love is groping,
love is lusting.
let me love you,
let me touch you.
let me erupt in you,
let me lick you.
turn your head to the left and close your eyes
and let me use your body for my endless
gratification.
I love you.
let me flood you sister.
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Very good.
I recognize the short line rhyme, a form I enjoy.
Here's one I did years and years ago—I just call it "Rhyme."
The old-fashioned language is deliberate, an exorcism I needed.
Trapped in his immoral life
He betrayed his loving wife
Hurting her he hurt their kids
Their daughter, their son
Lost in lies, sickening whys
Wrenching cries, helpless sighs
Undisguised by philosophy
He denied
Sorry?
Worry?
His wounded soul
Unwhole, adjusted
Cynical, he sinned again
Openly lusted
He cheated, repeatedly
He treated his wife like dirt
He laughed if she hurt
Party clown, professor
He professed, “Friends.”
He aimed his life towards them
His life controlled his wife
Sex was how it all began
Little did he understand
Fourteen masturbated
Fifteen kissed
Sixteen sex
Seventeen “missed”
Eighteen pregnant teen
Marriage, “had to”
A girl, a boy
Sister, brother, mother
Loved him, trusted
He hid, haunted, hunted, lusted
Drank, flirted, fornicated
Adulterer, liar
Lie-encrusted
Came home drunk
Untorn, unsated
Unsad, glad to
Stinking, Mr. Skank
Dark night
Bright tiny dream light
Moon white
Buddhists entered in
He confessed, he vowed reform
“No more sin!”
He prayed, he bowed
He practiced, he tried
He wanted to conform
He loved his wife, her warm
He loved their kids, their fun
He wanted to be good
Why couldn’t he do
What he knew he should?
Marriage, children, broken home
Divorce, dead horse, ruined carriage
Tragic poem
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A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
he
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
he
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
............once
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe.
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Dude life with out sex is a pain in the ass...
which means working for sex is also a pain in the ass
so why not just mastorbate and lay next to the one we love. when fighting always comes from trying to have sex..my life sucks and i am venting like a mother fucker right now
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This poem shows the power of simplicity and I love it. I've always found it very hard to do and, therefore, appreciate that you have done it so it well.
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Great poem, and GREAT description. I want to wait until I'm married to have sex with someone. I want to know them before I even do such a thing. Sex is something that you can't have with just anybody. It's something very special and it shows that you truely care and love that person. Heck, if I ever get married, like some other people, I'd probably have sex with the person I love on my wedding night. It makes sense, right? But still, great poem. I really enjoyed it and it really gets to me.
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wow. great poem for that other point of view. this is great
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Brava! And I know what you're saying... At least I think I do...
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Hey- wicked poem : ) I can clearly see your thought process. How did you make the preview for this the text by the way?
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Wow! that's beautiful. it made me think too.
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i like it, the implied meaning, and sarcastic tones. and yes ,the words, they flow well, nice work!
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sex is meant to be a special connection between two people. it isnt meant to be a one-night stand, it isnt meant to be only for your own pleasure. it is meant to be an expression of physical love and the revealing of the depth of trust. its meant to be real.
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I totally agree with you on this. Sex is supposed to be something beautiful you share with the one you love, but just like everything else that's beautiful in the world, today's society has to screw with it
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I love the format and the rhythmic flow of the words.
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I had to re-read this to catch sarcasm as I read it thinking it was meant. I think I understand most of it but I didn't get all of the references. I agree with the vulgarity with which society views sex. I believe it to be a beautiful act of spiritually joining with the one you love (whether people believe it spiritual is up to them, but the love and beauty involved is for any belief or lack of).
I'm not an expert, and take this only as constructive (or not so constructive lol!) criticism: I think it is fairly well written and has a good message disguised in nice words, but it could be improved. Perhaps through rhythm and less obscure references. I know they're not supposed to be obvious - poetry's no fun otherwise - but if the reader can't decifer it then it may not be written quite right.
I like it, anyway. Good work and a great idea! Hopefully, your word will help get through to people. :3
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Love the flow, the vulgarity. Great poem, well done.
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love is a feeling, you don't really choice the ones you love
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Gracious, I needed to read something like this. Not to fall into the trap; an act so magical and beautiful turned into sweat and dust, there is nothing to be romanticized in that. Thank you.
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in my opinion I think is so brilliant the poem.Wonderful.
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Your whole idea is quite clear and i agree that sex with true love is really unnessiary.
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dude you should white poams for a liveing your good at them you may have lost your verginity but you have talent impress the girl you love hopefully she will love you in return
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I am so sorry you all feel that way o.O Yeah, there are some--and maybe even many--that only want sex for sex, sans relationship or meaning. But sex itself is not inherently bad. I personally enjoy a two-year-and-still-going relationship, sex included. If it were only about the sex, the novelty would be long gone and we would certainly have other partners by now. I also personally know other couples who are also in long-term relationships, sex included.
Some people think that ideally, sex would be about love or something deeper or whatever. I think it depends greatly on one's own religion and values, but in my opinion sex for sex's sake is not a bad thing either. There are times when raw animal sex appeals much more than any touch-feely sex, and you CAN have both with the same person--I do it all the time. I don't even really understand the big taboo with sexual flings, as long as one is being physically and emotionally safe.
One more thing: the term, "making love"? It's a creepy label to put on sex. Just thought I'd throw that out there ^_^
I do think the poem shows a very real aspect of sex, and the artist's comments hold a great deal of truth as well. But there is a -whole- other side to the story; if one were to choose to ignore it, one would be choosing to forgo one of the more basic and wonderful activities in life.
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Your comment on your poem is what really got me. I've had sex, and it's not what it seems. I was tempted until I could take no more, so I gave in. They wanted me for my looks, not who I was inside. They took the thing that I held dear, my virginity. Now I have nothing. They took what they wanted, and when they were done, the threw me away, to rot. So now I have nothing. I've lost the only thing that meant anything. Now no one wants me and I'm all alone. I'm waiting for someone to come take me home. To hold me, and love me for who I really am. But until then..... I'm left in the darkness. Alone.
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*Hugs* I know it's been nearly two years since you posted this comment, but I just thought you sounded like you needed a hug. 
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Dude, whenever someone writes a poem about sex it just makes them look perverted. But you kind of make it a beautiful thing instead of some dirty hanky panky in the back seat of a car. Which is good.
Awesome job; wish I could be as literate as you but I have the attention span of a squirrel with ADD.
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actually, I think this poem is fascinating. Whilst most people associate sex with love, or a consumation of that, you speak of it as a trap, like a spider's web. You also cover the confusion that sex causes people to feel; does this mean something more.
A fav from me. xx
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Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!
Love is choice. Not a feeling. Sex only will not hold a couple together. No foundation at all to stand on when trouble comes.
And it will come!!
The main reason for not having sex before getting married. So you can build something together.
>^..^<
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