Comments: 30
reddragon122 [2014-01-06 05:08:36 +0000 UTC]
Screw you Leo I will win
Immeditaly loses
LOL
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reddragon122 In reply to DarkChi13 [2014-01-07 03:15:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm not such how everyone keeps thinking it's Raph or Donny's POV I mean, it's gaming, obviously Mikey
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reddragon122 In reply to DarkChi13 [2014-01-08 21:35:08 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome ^^
I also have a high reading level...so that might contribute
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DarkChi13 In reply to reddragon122 [2014-01-10 22:42:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, your praise has made me very happy haha.
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DarkChi13 In reply to DarkChi13 [2014-01-16 17:34:28 +0000 UTC]
Take over the world so that no one will ever be sad again!!
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reddragon122 In reply to DarkChi13 [2014-01-14 02:38:03 +0000 UTC]
Slowly, it takes over and nothing can stop it
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DarkChi13 In reply to reddragon122 [2014-01-14 03:44:29 +0000 UTC]
When you least expect it, it jumps you and can not be shaken off.
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reddragon122 In reply to DarkChi13 [2014-01-15 21:56:14 +0000 UTC]
*lets out a whole bunch of it* GO!!! BE FREE!!!
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sophie316 [2013-11-09 19:35:15 +0000 UTC]
Very nice
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DarkChi13 In reply to sophie316 [2013-11-10 01:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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orangebarmy [2012-11-06 19:33:54 +0000 UTC]
I just want to nom this piece it is lovely and descriptive
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DarkChi13 In reply to orangebarmy [2012-11-07 02:08:01 +0000 UTC]
Aww thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it. Your review really made me happy. Thanks for the favourite as well.
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orangebarmy In reply to DarkChi13 [2012-11-07 02:15:04 +0000 UTC]
very welcome it was a great piece.
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dondena [2012-11-04 05:17:51 +0000 UTC]
Yep, Leo is very attractive. I like his maturity and leadership abilities, fighting style and how he can spin his katanas real good. Just about everything.
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DarkChi13 In reply to dondena [2012-11-04 23:43:16 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks for the review. It's true. Leo is awesome.
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DarkChi13 In reply to babygirl127 [2012-11-04 23:42:53 +0000 UTC]
YAY thanks for the comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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AJB66613 [2012-11-03 14:41:39 +0000 UTC]
who the hell is it?!?!? at first i thought it was raph, but then "the best gamer around" made me think mikey, but the writing style is screaming donnie. what the shell?!
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DarkChi13 In reply to AJB66613 [2012-11-04 23:42:35 +0000 UTC]
It was supposed to be Mikey. I guess thats something I need to work on. Sorry for the confusion and thanks for the review.
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Darst-Llah [2012-11-03 06:25:17 +0000 UTC]
I like it!
Just a little confused as who's POV it is. I was assuming it was Raph (because of all the mental cussing and beat Leo's sorry ass part). But "the best gamer around" got me into doubts.
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DarkChi13 In reply to Darst-Llah [2012-11-03 06:32:21 +0000 UTC]
Haha sorry, I guess I will have to work on that for my next one. Thanks for the feedback and I am super happy that you like it.
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