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Published: 2012-05-09 06:50:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 684; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 1
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chapter 5

It was less painful than what people say. Everything's less painful when you're sad.

But there you are. Standing by the piano when I open my eyes. You yell at me. Scream until your face is blue but I don't care. I can't see you. Hear you.

I move forward, stumbling in my steps expecting you to keep the same distance away and I'm just running in place like in a cruel nightmare.

But I got closer.

I grabbed your hands.

I let out a sob when you look up at me with those eyes I love so much. I wrap my arms around you. Squeezing you tight, so tight my arms start to ache from the force I'm giving.

You don't mind. You just gently hold me back.

All you said was, "I'm sorry I got sick."

I cried then. Sobbed even. You just stroked my shell and held me close. "Never get sick like that again, never," I pull you up a little so you're toes barely touch the ground. I couldn't breath, just push out in an tiny voice, "never again" over and over.

"I promise." you kissed my temple, pulling back. You wiped the tears from my eyes, both of my good eyes "but you have to promise me you won't do that again. I wanted you to have a full life."

"It's not full without you." I press our foreheads together, gathering your hands into mine. "I need you... I told you. I'll always need you to be happy."

You give your cute light sigh of disapproval but you know it's true now. Besides, I know it's the same for you no matter how strong you can be.

Then...

You kissed the corner of my mouth. "Come on. Let's get settled in," you suggested. "we have a while to wait for our brothers to find us."

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DonellaTimbers [2018-01-06 19:34:46 +0000 UTC]

He's dead? Poor Donnie!

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DarkClosure In reply to DonellaTimbers [2018-01-19 10:35:19 +0000 UTC]

This was a dark story, before I insisted that I make nothing but happy endings. 

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theochu [2012-11-29 19:33:01 +0000 UTC]

good fic, i loved

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Prophetella [2012-06-04 06:45:09 +0000 UTC]

I love this fic. Now, I have a daughter and I love my guys so much... I really understand this.I kinda never got Romeo and Juliet in school but maybe I need to go read that again. I never really thought I would love anyone as deep as it would be too much to stay if they were gone.

I finally know I am wrong in that... and it is a relief. It is a blessing to have a love so deep in one's life.

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DarkClosure In reply to Prophetella [2012-06-04 16:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Correct me if I'm wrong but a few years back didn't you have a boyfriend/husband who had cancer? How is everything going with that?

You have a daughter? Is she adorable like Mikey?

I'm glad you like this. *hug*

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Prophetella In reply to DarkClosure [2012-06-05 06:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Thankfully you are wrong although my husband does have an artificial knee and only just had a full bloodwork done on him because he is worried he is getting fibromyalgia-- we think it's related to the ancient degrading water system in our apartment complex. I hope nothing interesting comes out of it other than finding the blood precursors for arthritis in his knees or even a bit of copper overload.

I tend to think my baby is one of the cutest ever... and I get a lot of people agreeing so it's not hard to be rather proud of her! She's still nursing her ahhzie's and will come to me shouting myum, or mmMah! She calls to me a lot too and now is getting around to learning daddy. My six year old is graduating from k this week and he's looking forward to a lot more playtime. We have had 2 pool trips with her so far! lil gal also is also learning to pee on cue. She's thrilled to do that.

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BrokenStride [2012-05-10 14:43:02 +0000 UTC]

DAMN YOU!!! runs for tissues!

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DarkClosure In reply to BrokenStride [2012-05-11 17:10:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry!! Not really. XD

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BrokenStride In reply to DarkClosure [2012-05-12 04:12:39 +0000 UTC]

You Better Not Be Sorry!!

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LunarLotis [2012-05-09 18:30:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying right now ;_; Good work on the story and the pics go so well with it <3

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DarkClosure In reply to LunarLotis [2012-05-11 17:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. I appreciate it.

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LunarLotis In reply to DarkClosure [2012-05-12 04:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome ^^

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leek2551 [2012-05-09 15:14:34 +0000 UTC]

Well ... now im sitting at the back of the classroom trying not to cry
Wonderful job! I love how well the pic's and the writing went together!

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DarkClosure In reply to leek2551 [2012-05-09 16:02:14 +0000 UTC]

I would say sorry for making you sad but this thing is a sad fic sooo, thank you for reading.

I'm glad you liked it.

And since you're the ONLY one to have commented I'll draw you something in pchat (because I've lost my skills in GIMP). What tmnt thing do you want?

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