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DarkCobraSK — Tonight is the End
Published: 2011-08-17 06:33:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description It ends tonight,
This forever lasting pain
That runs through my head
Every waking moment
Driving me insane.

It ends tonight,
The loneliness that fills
My slowly beating heart
That has turned blacker than night
And has been shattered into pieces.

It ends tonight
These thoughts of running the blade
Down my wrist over and over again
Until I can't bleed anymore
And my body lays cold and motionless.

For tonight is the night
That these dreams of death
are turned into my reality
So I can forever end this pain
And finally find my sanctuary.
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Comments: 6

WhatAmItoYou [2011-08-17 16:47:15 +0000 UTC]

LOL well at least you said at night rather than the ridiculous 4 am! its good... really deep and perfect but i find perfection in flaws like this pov

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DarkCobraSK In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-08-17 19:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, this one was actually made written right after the last one.
Thanks, I do my best to make my poetry deep and most of it tends to be on the dark side. I find darker stuff more fun to write than the happy side one things.

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WhatAmItoYou In reply to DarkCobraSK [2011-08-17 19:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Jeez... freakazoid

Darker is much more interesting to read than lovesick or happy

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DarkCobraSK In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-08-17 19:11:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm a night owl, it can't be helped.

I agree, I feel there is so much more that can be written if it is dark.

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WhatAmItoYou In reply to DarkCobraSK [2011-08-17 19:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Lucky lucky lucky...

Exactly! And yet people get upset at me for writing it. You though, you have a real talent for the stuff, it's incredible

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DarkCobraSK In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-08-17 20:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes, other times it can be a pain.

This is why I stick to DeviantArt when it comes to my writing. Most of my friends and family don't see my writing because I rather not have them think there is something horribly wrong with me lol.
Thank you!

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