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darkdoomer ā WHAT MAKE YOU LOLING LIKE THIS
Published: 2009-05-06 17:22:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 4512; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 256
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I like the shading, just like in your other works. You are pretty good at that as others said it too.
Chu's goggles look good too. It's not easy to make accessories to cartoon characters that pysically fit them and aren't out of proportion.
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The poses are fine too, just like Chu's Famas. (The bipod looks strange on a small assault rifle, but that's another thing)
Loling? Yes, I see MIW's sarcastic half-smile. However, it is a bit too small compared to his head (Just like Chu's). You should make it a bit larger, that's all. Same goes for the eyebrows. You should make them like Chu's on this pic, [link] Another way is to leave out the lineart completely, shading is enough in many cases.
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thanks for the crit man! and i agree, it was hard to find googles that fits on chu's big animu eyes
;Ā¬ ; no idea why but didnt managed to get this crit displayed.
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What do you mean by displayed?
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on the pic submission : it wont display automatically, i realized i must allow the critiques to be posted or not T^T
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Who is the brown figure on the right ? Some kind of imp or homunculus ?
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NOW he's familiar and I even have a subfolder of pics of this antisocial misanthropic devil imp.
Since I composed this I have deteriorated physically and mentally. It is now 6 1/2 years or so.
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What? You mean.. never mind. But Patachu is so cute! I could spot him in a crowd of 1000.
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Miw's upper leg area looks funny. The spacing between the legs are awkward...but thats the only flaw I can really pick out right now. Well done.
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I like the feet on the orange one. You have exhibited a tendency to make them look sort of balloon-like in the past. Though I'm sure that is not without its applications.
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Cool stuff, and interesting how you used the same method of your colouring (the halftone-type design) on the lineart too. Looks different to your usual work! Really dig the texture placement of the background also, suitable for the characters and very nicely done!
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interesting new look your trying bol with the soft glow going on. Think there should be more of a shadow casting on Patachu from Miw as the light is favouring his side.
nice choice with the Famas too :]
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Expressions... You're doing them soooo well ^__^
Your nice chars, cute (if you can say so for them, knowing their, let's say, abilities
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hey nice work!
i like your style (and the weapons ^^)
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Long time no see Dark'!
( j'aime le simili FAMAS )
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Wow, I really like the way you color and shade o.o
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Nicely drawn, I like their expressions.
Your character looks sexy tho. n.n;
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