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DarkGomo — shedding skins
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Published: 2011-08-05 20:48:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2772; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 0
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Model: Devon Storm21/52
She was so wonderful to work with and I cannot wait to do it again.
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Ok, let me start by saying that this is a really cool idea. At first glance, it reminds me of a scene from a horror movie, which is awesome. The graininess and sepia-esque tones add to the overall impact. Now to the areas of improvement. First, there is a blurry white streak on the lower right side, which distracts from the focus of the picture. Second, the girl blends a bit too much with the background. Maybe desaturating her and the area around her will help, by providing some contrast. Also, I know that the girl is the focus, but I think the overall piece would be improved if you moved her closer to the bottom, slightly off-center. Since she's in a forest, if you did that it would show some of the trees and details of the background, which would make a more desolate atmosphere. Good job!
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lovely capture.
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Wonderfully done! and I LOVE the blurry piece on the right side. Since your title is "Shedding Skins" the out of focus object reminds me of a snakeskin, further mimicking your concept. And the fact that your model does blend into the tones of the ground makes it even better. Overall, a gorgeous shot!
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thank you so much!! that was totally what I was going for.
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