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Published: 2008-02-13 01:49:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 514; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 8
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Description Just doodling... got this little picture of this in my head, and it wanted out NOW. Sort of alittle story idea... Were Ed and Al are sent back to Amestris, just before the gate is destroyed, to right the balance b/w worlds.
*Story*
The old, dented armour sat in the grass, small animals surrounding it. The sound of laughter filled the air, as four young children ran towards the old suit.
"H-h-hheeeey! Dad said i could play in it firrrst!" Wined a young girl with bright blond hair and cool golden eyes.
"Well, dad's not here, is he, Trish?" Sneered a boy, two years her elder, with dark brown hair and blue eyes.
"Your so mean to her Dan." Said another boy, with the same hair and eyes of Trish. "Dad would spank you and put you in time out if he knew."
Trish grinned at the boy happily. "Thanks En"
En smiled. "We twins have to stick together, huh?"
Trailing behind them, the youngest of the group, was aboy with Mousy brown hair and dark brown eyes. In his hand he held an old stuffed cat.
"Come on Ely!!" Trish called. "Unlce Al wants us to get the head and bring it back as fats as possible!"
Ely hung back, eyes filled with doubt. "Daddy told me to leave it alone. He said you shouldn't touch it either."
"Well, thats why Uncle Al is your dad and not mine!"
Running through the grass laughing, the group of children rached the decript pile of old armour, unaware of the story it had to tell and the life it had onced lived... now just a forgotten relic in an old backwoods town...

(Just a little story, nothing special. hoped you enjoyed it.)
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Comments: 29

HawkeyeRiza37 [2008-02-15 03:25:52 +0000 UTC]

I really love the drawing! And the story that goes with it! Wonderful job my friend

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to HawkeyeRiza37 [2008-02-16 00:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Still? I wonder why... I know some people did... 0_o hmmm, another of my friends was having trouble. Well, its the thought that counts! (The story just kind of came to me)

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HawkeyeRiza37 In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-16 01:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Okay, NOW it's in my favorites! Guess it just took a while or something

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to HawkeyeRiza37 [2008-02-16 01:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Wierd... I was going to scrap it, do you think it'll work better there?

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HawkeyeRiza37 In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-16 02:04:20 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so. DA acts weird like that sometimes. It's probably best to leave it where it is^^

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to HawkeyeRiza37 [2008-02-16 02:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Too late. 03o

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HawkeyeRiza37 In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-16 05:12:22 +0000 UTC]

XD; Moving to scraps doesn't mean it'll get deleted or something though...does it?

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to HawkeyeRiza37 [2008-02-16 06:32:43 +0000 UTC]

No, not at all, it just shouldn't show up in my main gallery anymore.

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HawkeyeRiza37 In reply to HawkeyeRiza37 [2008-02-15 03:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Argh! But it's not letting me it!!! ><

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cakeless [2008-02-13 13:46:54 +0000 UTC]

>=3 haha! I will take that to me and I will put it one my bed! haha! hey great one!

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to cakeless [2008-02-14 01:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks.

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Sladra-chan [2008-02-13 05:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Awww, the piece and the story excerpt go well together...and lookit the little kitty!!!

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to Sladra-chan [2008-02-14 01:15:13 +0000 UTC]

I thought of Al's little kitty in "Flame vs FullMetal" and thought he deserved a little love.

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Sladra-chan In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-17 19:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Awww, yeah. Al + Kitties is always cool cuteness.

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to Sladra-chan [2008-02-17 20:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes indeed, a formula for success. Any luck with your Acceptace into Org-Infinity?

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Sladra-chan In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-19 16:56:57 +0000 UTC]

...~goes to sulk in a corner~ Haven't gotten back to me...yet again....

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to Sladra-chan [2008-02-20 02:13:44 +0000 UTC]

0A0 Gomeeen! Sorry! Here, have some toast.

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Hero-Maul [2008-02-13 03:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Is that how FMA ends, or is this fanfic?

Not the kids, the whole "Al is human again and blahblah".

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to Hero-Maul [2008-02-14 01:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, he does end up as a human again, in the end, w/ the ability to contol other suits of armour.

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Hero-Maul In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-14 01:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Like, how?

From a distance? Soul transfer?

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to Hero-Maul [2008-02-14 01:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Hm, he uses gloves w/ an alchemic circle, calps 'em together, places his hands on the armour, and wham-bam he has a tiny bit of his soul in there to controle it.

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Hero-Maul In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-14 03:55:37 +0000 UTC]

But again, how? Is he "in" the armor, or outside controlling from his brain?

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to Hero-Maul [2008-02-15 01:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh, his body is still moving, he just controls it. I guess, it's like this-
In FMA, the body is connected to the soul through the spirit. He transfers part of his soul to the armour, with a bit of his spirit to keep the connection, a lot like a puppet on strings.

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SinicalDemon [2008-02-13 02:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Cool! ^^

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to SinicalDemon [2008-02-13 02:36:49 +0000 UTC]

d(^w^d)

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SinicalDemon In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-13 02:42:28 +0000 UTC]

^-^ Awww.....how cute!! <3

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twitis [2008-02-13 01:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nice I really like this!! *huge smile* Keep up the awesome work

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to twitis [2008-02-13 02:12:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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twitis In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-02-14 05:41:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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