Vivi567 [2011-06-16 15:24:06 +0000 UTC]
I like the way it's drawn and the pencil strokes, but the hair is a bit distracting as you have made that the darkest area (which is correct), but you also need to focus more on the other darkest areas, so really try and emphasise them so you can get more of a feel of the tones Perhaps the eyes need a bit of work, but I mean you can actually tell it's him anyway. Keep it up and just practice with tones
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darklordica In reply to Vivi567 [2011-06-16 18:17:49 +0000 UTC]
actually i used pastels, but it looks like pencil cause of the scanner i know, i got carried away with that black and then i tried to make it lighter but failed.yeah, i should have put some black someplace else too.thank you very much, i really appreciate you criticism
Vivi567 In reply to darklordica [2011-06-17 15:45:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh right I see, well pastels are cool as well, but never mind I mean I can see that you can draw either way. Not a problem, just keep practicing
darklordica In reply to Vivi567 [2011-06-17 18:02:39 +0000 UTC]
sure i will
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