Comments: 36
Valeria1314151611 [2016-02-08 02:47:23 +0000 UTC]
SOMEONE FANFIC THIS IDEA PLEASE!!!
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nightfuryrox [2015-08-25 16:45:37 +0000 UTC]
DARNET U MADE ME THINK! lol My plan for this summer was NOT to think... lol (love it)
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TheMusical6 [2014-08-11 01:08:16 +0000 UTC]
what if the queen of corona was jack's sister and she just married the king of corona?
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Dustfinger1 [2014-05-29 21:25:31 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwwwwww. ADORABLENESS!
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VampKate95 [2014-04-04 18:02:24 +0000 UTC]
WOW
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ROTBTD-FAN [2014-04-02 01:19:07 +0000 UTC]
wow good thinking !
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acts29forchrist [2014-02-11 04:29:41 +0000 UTC]
Okay, may I have an author moment?
Five years Later
Jack flew to the window at hearing the singing. I know that voice, he thought to himself. He went up the tower and opened the window. The girl was turned, facing the fire, and her hair was glowing a golden light, creating and penetrating warmth to the old tower. She stopped at feeling a cold rush fall upon her. She shrugged and continued to brush her hair, and it started glowing like the sun again.
Jack stared at the girl, and was annoyed by the feeling he often got. Bits and pieces in his mind, it was there, but then gone. Jack walked up slowly to her, but stopped when he made the wood creek beneath him. The girl turned around. It took him several seconds to realize that she was looking at him.
"Jack," she said softly. He gasped quietly to himself. She rubbed her eyes, and then reopened, but there he was standing right in front of him. It can't be, she thought.
"Yu-y-you, you see me?" Jack said surprised. "Wh-who are you?" Heartache struck the girl.
"You don't remember me?" She asked in a shaking voice, standing up from her stool.
"Have we met before?"
"It's me...Rapunzel." Tears filled her eyes, and a cold stone hit her heart. "You don't remember..."
Jack didn't know what she was talking about. He didn't know what to do or say to Rapunzel. He felt like he should know her, but he...he didn't. Who was this girl, and why did he want to know her more?
(Idk, just a thought)
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acts29forchrist In reply to MikaelaH1 [2014-02-25 02:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Really? I'm melting! Thank you! You've made my day! It makes me feel good when people like my writing. I'm still young and have !much to learn. You've inspired me to keep writing.
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acts29forchrist In reply to DarkMousyxKagome [2014-02-12 17:00:20 +0000 UTC]
Aww man! In the second paragraph I meant, "But there he was standing right in front of HER" not him.
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GrimTales29 [2014-01-21 18:16:31 +0000 UTC]
I AGGRESSIVELY APPROVE
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RayBurciago [2014-01-20 23:18:40 +0000 UTC]
God DAMMIT!! Would you mind if I wrote a fanfic like this? If you haven't already?
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FrostSentry150 [2014-01-20 22:28:46 +0000 UTC]
It does make me think..... o:
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FangirlingClub [2014-01-20 22:15:52 +0000 UTC]
This is just so sweet the feels
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