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DarkNalcon — Hybrid Realities
Published: 2005-02-02 16:23:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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Days seem so longWhen I sit here alone
fading in and out of thought
that is but the memory of yesterday
realising that theres no point in living
As I'm living a lie
but what is a lie for truth is a shadow
As i sit trying not to cry
those memories continue to torture me
And what i see before my eyes slowly...
...fades away...
I'm dreaming now
But such a horrid dream is this!
why? why?
...eruption of thought
How can this be truth
When the lies are so much better
Confused at the sights
Confused at the noise
My life is not in control
I am not myself anymore
There's this demon inside me
Trying to free me....
...From...
...reality...
...chains...
...shackles....
tieing me down
trapping me in this invisible world
all to cage my inner being
i fight
i struggle......but....
nothing, trapped inside this cage, locked
so tightly, my movement
breaks my bones
Lies, tell me they're all lies!
This isn't the truth, I won't believe you!
This has got to be better than reality!
Stuck in this realm full of burning torture!
The sensation...
what pleasure can i dervive from this torture
why is all hope a false reality
forver traped in the dark recsesses of false truth
Everything will tear up my insides
The shadows don't tell me anything
trapped, bound by chains
I feel like dust and dirt
Pain, it hurts
Constantly...
...pain...
what end will come
what night shall i sleep no more ?
Free me.
I can ask for nothing more.
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Comments: 18
definately powerful feelings.. I really enjoyed reading this.. the imagery is just brilliant.. great work to the both of you
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i like the imagery of it and how it kind of moves into a panic; it kind of reminded me of drowning... and i like the soft, plea at the end. very nice poem
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thanks you should go check out my compainion writer shes good
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great job to you both the only time i tried collaberating with someone then ended up stealing all my stuff and leaving without giving me credit-_- very kool that you two can work together. amazing subject matter and the way you link together your words is extreamly good. hope to see more from you.
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its ok we did well together
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excellent job yall. i was so moved by this and could actually feel your pain. but that's the point in
writing isn't it. duh!
dark you know i love you and keep thrilling us with more.
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well its a colab so ill get erica to work with me more ok
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i said yall.lol i do love the piece as always.
well okay
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