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Spirogs [2008-11-17 20:04:34 +0000 UTC]
oh hey! won any duels yet?
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DarknessSealed In reply to Spirogs [2008-11-18 04:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Currently doing a pencil only splash page against .
1st duel, will be submitting soon, doing the bg~
XD
As a blacksmith, yes, cause I offer weapon designing for SDL.
PS,
Dohi's design is nicely done~
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Spirogs [2008-11-17 20:00:32 +0000 UTC]
Heheh your guy is a blacksmith too eh? cool armor design =]
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OldBegger [2008-02-01 05:49:17 +0000 UTC]
This is probably the coolest character in the entire league. Great job.
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danielcherng [2007-11-15 04:13:38 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhh Its a Gundam!
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DarknessSealed In reply to danielcherng [2007-11-15 07:51:09 +0000 UTC]
Don't you worry, this armor is not in its 'True Demon' Form yet. *secretly installs mini I-field Generator*
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conmandamned [2007-11-14 18:23:17 +0000 UTC]
Here it goes.
I like what you have done with the armor. Its very good at seperating a very red character from a very red background. But here are a few points I found hard to read visually:
The main point of interest that I had problems with were the gloves. All around they are the same shade of red, so its hard to get any definition of where his fingers are, or how they are wrapping around the sword.
The white part in the middle will be hard to reproduce, because its hard to tell wether it is cloth or more sharp armour. It makes more sense that it is cloth, so it needs a softer look, with more folds and more shading to make it appear light.
On the foot to our right, the armour is kind of cut off to mold to the shape of the foot, but it doesn't do the same thing on the other side.
The cloth beneath the armour on the legs is hard to read. I thinka good, solid black would do you best.
The bright yellow moon in the background should be sending some light onto his armour, making it yellow in places. The shading is opposite of this, and is shaded in another direction.
Overall, its a good solid piece of work. The thing it lacks most is shading, but your anatomy is knowledgeable and skilled. I wish you good luck in your future fights, and hope that this has been more helpful than rambling.
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conmandamned [2007-11-14 03:44:13 +0000 UTC]
Good luck, and welcome to the league. Ronin will probably ask that you reformat this to be viewable at 600, like the all the others before he posts it on his page.
Good luck in future battles.
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conmandamned In reply to DarknessSealed [2007-11-14 17:32:59 +0000 UTC]
ON the resizing, or are you looking for an honest breakdown of your work? I would be pleased to provide both.
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