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TAILS AWAY *read from Right to Left*

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Chapter 1: My Bid Farewell Home

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Good Luck Tails - Page 3

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Don't Leave! - Page 4

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WHAT I HAVE TO SAY

For once I wanted to keep things simplistic for a BG, this is portrayed on the final panel... I saved a lot of time substituting it with a bright shine for effect. ^_~

Roughing on the rest of the BG and focusing on the two characters Sonic & Tails gave me insight to using a new technique. It's very effective however the only downside to the final panel is that it possibly 'rather' unbalanced on (contrast) light and dark... If you look at the overall picture it gives you the impression that it's a empty in the right parts of the page...

Nevertheless I enjoyed doing this page and hope to continue the next page with the same quality. ^_^ Thank you for reading. *bows in thanks*


STORY TIME

Sonic giving his closing words to Tails was something to never forget.

Tails would never feel alone because rest assured he’s got friends who will look out for him wherever he goes. He is about to embark on an adventure of a lifetime, will he ever come back home? Or is he already going home to a new land that was of his past 18 years ago…? Only time will tell.

Is there someone in the group who doesn’t want him to leave so bad…? Find out in the next page of Tails Away on “Don’t Leave!”


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REPLIES


--- Wow you got college? Man the burden we have on our studies... -_-;; Well keep up the good work buddy and enjoy while you can. ^_~



--- I like how you said previously:

"I think it's expressing Tail's uttermost desire to go home and he will do anything to go home... By the way he's looking towards his home, I think, it's like he has already decided on a journey to either find his home or go back..."

Indeed that was well interpreted SHF. ^_^ That was the impression I'm trying to give to everyone on these first couple of chapters - Prologue and First. ^_~

But home doesn't necessarily mean it's in True Skies, Tails home is also with him at Sonic and the gang... ^_^ It'll be a tough decision whether he decided to commit himself to protect the heav....

Hey! I'm giving out spoilers! LMFAO! XD XD XD THanks for the feedback SHF. BTW wow you actually liked the blur effect? Cool! ^_^



--- "Whoo!! I see you had fun with the smudge tool on the final panel didn't you?"

Indeed I did very much!

"Tails is now INDEPENDENT!!! *puffs proudly and pats him on the shoulder*
I'm confident that he'll find his parents!!"

Tails --- Aww thank you. ^_^ *salutes to you*



--- "I love it very much... everything you draw has almost an aura about it... an aura of love for what you do... and when I feel that I know that you put your heart into what you do... ^^ ......."

"No, honestly... you portray the characters and moments in ways I likely couldn't ever think up. I love your style, and the way you draw your characters, and the way you shade, and do expressions and... *sigh* Well generally everything about it is brilliant. ^^ Can't wait for more of it, Darky-chan... *snuggles and kisses your cheek*"

Your degree of reply and depth of feeling towards a good comment is always... Always a welcome to me...

Fresh as it always is my breath longs for more in future and even if you don't manage to reply on several occasions I listen to your words entrusted in your heart...

Thanks you Bobbi, I love you so very much, you're the core of support and source of inspiration, I hope to do the same for you... Always. *nuzzles you...* ^_~



--- "How romantic,using the colors of your love...eh,i'm a romance freak,such things make me giddy like that.But the cover is very beautiful and very emotional,i love it!I can't wait for more of your manga!"

"Loving it,I love this manga! TAILS AWAY ROCKS THE MANGA WORLD! I can't wait for more heart-string tugging,emotion-drivien pages with chock-full of detail!"

LMAO! XD I like how you stringed together this! heart-string tugging,emotion-drivien pages with chock-full of detail!!! LMAO! XD

Aww thank you for your awesome feedback! I really appreciate it hypermegatailsfan. ^_~



--- Eh..heh..heh.. Dude I don't have the chance to even download anything at home! LMAO! XD Darn... Sorry if all that time you been picking a song and trying to fit it in to the manga, I'm really sorry about this but nevertheless it's not as if I'm saying I never appreciate what you did. ^_^ It's awesome that you've managed to find a song that suits you. I'm sure I can listen to it with my heart too. ^_^



--- Hey man you most welcome on the feedback. ^_^ I hope they helped! ^_~ And thank you for always commenting on my stuff bro! XD



--- Sonic has hair!! That IS Sonic, right?

Indeed that is Sonic. ^_~



--- "So cool. ^^ *sniff* Tails is off on his own now. Tails looks so cute in that one panel! ^_^ And I think you should try to change the direction Cream's ears are facing. They should be in the back. But, hey, if that's your style or you like it that way, it's fine with me, really. Cause it doesn't really make that much of a difference."

Ah I see what you mean. ^_~ I actually drew it that way because of the influence of my new project... The one I'm talking about - Original idea... ^_^ The hero is a rabbit... *giggles* and I drew his ears from top to front rather than the Sonic Team's approach of Top to back in Cream's. ^_~



--- "Hmm... I wonder if Cream will kiss Tails good bye? That would be sweet!
(I've always thought of those two getting together)"

Indeed I support that too... ^_^ But I'm afraid she won't be doing that here. ^_^ Maybe in another future project I might. ^_~

"I may be new but I'm a fan of your work for a long time.
Darkspeeds, that is beautiful."

Wow.. thanks Lightwind. ^_^ I wonder how long is 'long' in your definition? X3



--- "That’s pretty cool^^ They say their final farewells. It's always kinda sad when a friend leaves, but you gotta stay strong for them and know they'll be alright ^^ I like the sorta effect on the last panel, so nice "


Awww... *hugs* ^_^ You're getting closer and closer to the message being expressed here, in fact it's pretty much the core of the chapter. ^_~ Cheers on the feedback as always. Glad you liked the effect on the last panel too hedgie-girl. Oh BTW thanks again for that awesome pic you drew of me! I really appreciate it. ^__^ *hugs some more*



--- "Waves arms, rapidly* Hooray! Tails Away is back ^.^! I was looking forward to the next page of this one xD Not saying that the other story didn't interest me, though O.O I guess the Tails Away story just grabbed my interest a lot more.. but I like them both ;.;!

Anyhoo.. this looks really nice ;.;! It's wonderful that all the crying and stuff is gone.. I actually expected Miles to still be tearing in this scene.. but I like the way that he was drawn so determined and happy again ^.^ Surely, he shouldn't be crying anymore, despite having to leave his friends ;.; They will definitely see each other again someday.. so yay! ^.^ Hooray for looking forward to future.. chatter xD He'll definitely have a lot to say the next time he comes to visit!

Indeed ^.^ I like the way everyone is saying their last goodbyes and everything ;.; And I adore the expression on Miles' happy face in the 4th panel xD It's so cute! I like the little accessories he now contains, too ;.; *Pokes the scarf and goggle-thingies*

And I adore the last panel ;.; The way it kinda.. fades off. I like how everything is blended in and stuff ^.^
*Blinks several times* When I first saw it, a hidden meaning kinda popped into my head.. but alas, I forgot it ;.; Sorry xD *Just woke up* My thoughts are kinda scattered so I gotta play tag with my miiiiind "" *Hit*

But.. yes. Awesome job on this comic! ;.; And I like the new plan for how they're gonna be shown ^.^ Can't wait to see more pages soon!
"

"EEEEEE! LIGHT BLUE O.O!! My favorite color-pyoooo! ;.; *Waves arms, rapidly*
And it fits with the drawing so well! Like.. it reminds me of the sky xD And doesn't your story relate to the sky a lot?

The sky is so unbelievably clue ;.;.. *Kicked for rambling about a Trigun quote*

But yes.. that's so pretty ;.; I adore the colors chosen for this ^.^ MTP was wonderful in that => Good idea! And I like the drawing of Miles sitting there and looking out.. nice liney-coloring for that XD Reminds me of a manga for some reason.. and it looks very hopeful ;.; Which is obviously an ongoing theme in your story ^.^

So yes.. nice cover! ^.^ Now the real chapters finally begin.. can't wait for it!
"


O.O;;; *faints in an instant....*

*wakes up again rubbing my eyes...*

Man... O_O

YOU - WRITE - SO - MUCH!!! *SHOT X 1,000 times*!!!! XD XD XD

Every time I post my comic page the post feedback I get from you is enormous and extremely a pleasure to read! LMAO! XD

I wish I could burst ou laughing in my computer labs in uni but everyone will think I'm crazy or something! XD XD XD

Thank you... ^_^ Thank you so much for keeping the spirit in me and of the mangas and comics that I do. ^_^

Man I feel guilty not being able to reply to each and every paragraph you've written here! O.O;;; XD

Yes Tails is indeed looking forward to the future. ^_~ I'm very glad on how you picked out something that you've predicted that will come true! Yes Tails will be in tears (well teary once more.. ^_^) once again... X3 1,000 points to you for that! You are so good at anticipating on my mangas and comics! X3

I like how you said Page 2 "it looks very hopeful" " and how it is an ongoing theme in your story" ... Indeed that was the message I was trying to portray to you guys, well done! Another 1,000 points. ^_~ *giggles* X3

*in Dr. Eggman's tone - BIIIIIIINNGUUUUU!!!!*

*breathes*

Man I can never catch a breath reading or replying to your feedback! LMAO! XD XD XD It's so filled with lots of things to say! X_X *giggles at the quote from Trigun...*

I'm glad you like his accessories and stuff Taeshilh-chan. ^_^ I hope to bring more pages soon!!! XXX3 Thank you again for your wonderful compliments and in-depth feedback!!!



--- "Nawww... That's so cute that you used the colors of the one you love. ^^- You're so sweet.

Anyways, I like this cover a lot. The color of choice is my favorite color and also the color pattern of one of MY characters! o_o It's such a small world... I get a strong feeling of pride for widdle Tails, going out on a journey all by himself. Ready to face challenges and over come them. I really can't wait to see the next few pages. "


Aww thanks for the lovely compliment ShadyKitten. ^_^
I'm glad that you're thrilled to see more pages to come. There's a whole lot more to expect.... X3 *hugs*



--- "Awesome work, Elson! ^_^ The two tone coloration of it really gives it that feeling you were looking for. One of sadness.... but one of hope at the same time. Hope for the future, for things to come.....

But isn't that what we all hope for? A better life? Something brighter around the next curve life throws at us? *laughs softly* I would rant on about this, but I'm not one to take up space most of the time, ne bro?

*hugs* Keep up the good work and I hope things are going well for you and Bobbi.... I know things have finally started to turn around for me. I finally have a few things to work for, and they're rock solid this time. No more changing my mind this time. ^_~

*pats you on the back* I keep you in my prayers, bro. I hope things keep going up from here, ne?"


Awww thank you little sis'... ^_^ *hugs you tight* I highly appreciate the support you give to me and Bobbi, and also the care you give to people in general.

I'm really glad that things are working out for you. ^_~ It is great to see that we're all coping and feeling more positive than ever. I shall keep my prayers close to my family, friends and sibblings (yes with you in there of course! X3 ^_^) and especially to my love Bobbi. ^_~ *huggles Bobbi *

Huurr... Life is ever becoming more wonderful by the day. ^_~

Wish you best of luck on your studies and social life little sis'. Good health to you always. ^_~ *thumbs up*




--- Bro take your time, there's no rush in it! It's all good! X3 Thank you for taking your time reply Sonicolas. ^_^

I've always wondered how you came up with such a unique name of Sonicolas ...? Sonic + olas...... Hmmm. ^_^



And thank you everyone else who commented faithfully: ^_~

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LEGALITIES

Tails, Amy and all other Sonic characters that were used in this manga are not mine. They belong to Sonic Team as rightful creators and owners.

Concept of Tails Away (C) by Darkspeeds. Other characters in the manga such as Swift, Duke, Bunta, Slider, Mary, Sara, Uncle Ben, Vale, Hunter & Hajime are (C) by Darkspeeds. ^_~

Opinions and feedback made by deviant artists, friends and sibblings are rightfully theirs. They are entitled to express their views and thoughts on anything of Tails Away. Please respect their words and feedback regardless. Thank you and hope you'll enjoy reading the manga. ^_^

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Comments: 44

maru--ato [2009-07-07 17:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow
I thought i'd never see Tails leave!
... Wow,
I just can't type. Just can't
An Artist's Real Motive.

wow..

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SparrowPaw [2009-04-05 14:12:17 +0000 UTC]

poor tails...the poor little mutated fox dosnt even know his mommy

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mastermazaki [2008-09-24 21:23:26 +0000 UTC]

You did awesome here!!! you are awesome, and someone I need in my art group!

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arnoldtails [2007-07-31 22:51:38 +0000 UTC]

WOW

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Soniash11 [2007-04-02 22:20:10 +0000 UTC]

IT's SOOOOOOOOOO SAD. how amazing Tails goes on w/o Sonic by his side.
Very Touching indeed.

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GuildmasterPhill [2007-01-21 16:43:57 +0000 UTC]

that's cool, Tails is leaving the closest he's had to family to find his parents! ...anything could happen!

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jaggedice200 [2004-07-12 19:22:55 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean about hte emptyness
didnt notice till you said something
but its still a good page none the less
the pace of things make me miss the lil errors like that

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darkspeeds In reply to jaggedice200 [2004-07-16 18:07:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the opinion! It'll surely help me improve me panel layout and direction in future. ^_~

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Sonicfan101 [2004-03-27 02:49:52 +0000 UTC]

That's really cool. I can't wait to see more of Tails Away! Keep up the good work Darkspeeds. ^_-

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SaberHappyZero [2004-03-26 05:23:48 +0000 UTC]

aww!
lol Swift looks sooo cute! X3

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Lightwind [2004-03-25 12:33:22 +0000 UTC]

That is indeed sweet.
How "long" have I been a fan... since last november...

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dodgefoxx [2004-03-25 06:13:22 +0000 UTC]

I think the Sonic in the last panel could do with a little reworking, I guess it just looks a tad weird jumping from fully shaded to blank. Everything else is wonderfully done tho, can't wait to see Tails finally getting his own adventure underway, whoo!!

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sonicolas [2004-03-25 04:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! Second panel is beautiful!
I don't know why, but there's something special about it... I'm sure it's not just because of the incredble amount of details it contain and because of the awesome shading ^_^ But just imaginating this one in color makes me drool *bricked*
Anyway, the others are great too! Especially that last one which is viewed in interesting angle
Oh and about the name?
Well, it came out accidently when I used to sig my pictures "S.Nicolas"
I used to name the . look like an o o.o;;
Since then I used that nickname to represent me. But today adopted another...
"Sonikorasu" (*SHOT because it's the same name* )

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NeoLeo [2004-03-25 02:33:16 +0000 UTC]

You can do it Tails! Nice job as usual man.

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hedgie-girl [2004-03-25 01:36:43 +0000 UTC]

Everything looks so peaceful yet it's kinda sad, since Tails is leaving n' all. They all seem proud of his decision though, as true friends always are. Nice shading as always too^^ The expression on Shift's face seems like he's gotta say something before Tails leaves, or maybe he doesn't want Tails to even leave. Also I'm glad you liked the gift I made for you, and thanks so much for the fav :3 It's much appreciated. *hugs*

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Tails0 [2004-03-25 00:34:49 +0000 UTC]

hey no prob!
Btw i like how u did this page of Tails Away! i'm dying 2 find out what happens next! ^_^

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ShadyKitten [2004-03-24 23:28:36 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee.. I think I know who doesn't want Tails to go away... ^^- But I won't tell. ;3 I really like the last panel! Right near the beach... X3!! It's good to know your friends are by your side, even in spirit. It gives you a sense of security. Anyways, I love this Page, lots of emotion. And I'll bet the next one has more. I can't wait. :3

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ploomy [2004-03-24 23:17:14 +0000 UTC]

I noticed that you do a LOT of shading...couple of questions
1) Do you shade with a pencil and if so then...
2) DONT YOU GET LIKE A LOT OF SMUDGES ON YOUR HAND?!

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taeshilh [2004-03-24 21:34:08 +0000 UTC]

I AM THE QUEEN OF WRITING-A LOT-OF-NONSENSE *Poses and is hit with a tomato*

.. And I just realized that I made a horrible typo in that comment as well O.O

The sky is unbelievably blue, not clue xD!! Silly me.

So yes. Indeed. Onto the million-paragraph reply of doooooom! *Thunderbolt*

Once more, wonderful job on the comic ;.; It's so emotional and saddening.. and very family-like, in my opinion xD It's like Sonic is letting go of his only child.. the son that stayed with him since the beginning ;.; It feels a lot like that.. except in a more.. sibling-perspective xD I can't imagine Sonic being a father-figure to Miles and stuff ;.;

But yeah.. very sad. Obviously, it's hard to let someone so special to you go.. someone who's been there since.. forever O.O Poor Sonic.. but it's wonderful that he isn't putting up a fight or whining for Miles to stay.. very honorable of him to do so. It's just something that has to happen.. Miles needs to leave for his own adventures and to pursue his goals in life.. to stop him would be like trying to stop the wind..

But I'm getting very emotional here xD I like the way it was drawn! The shading on Sonic is wonderful ^.^ I adore the shocked and puzzled face Swift has in the background as well xD!! That's so cute!

The last panel is nice ^.^ The fact that they lack coloring and shading makes you practically zoom to them the second you get to that panel.. it kinda jumps at you.. and that's good ;.; Since that'll be their last moment together for a long time.. and the background for that is simple like you said, but sweet ^.^

I am prating a lot now xD Sorry if I once again shocked you with yet another incredibly long reply ;.; Surely, I'm beginning to get very boring now xD Things that interest me always brings in a lot of ramblage from me, though.. so yeah. I didn't mean to annooooooy ;.;

Anyhoo, keep up the wonderful work! ^.^ I can't wait to see new pages of this-pyo!

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MilesTailsPrower-007 In reply to taeshilh [2004-03-25 00:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Waaahaaaaiii I'm supposed to be the attention hogger around here... *smacks Taeshilh playfully and giggles* ^_^.....

Well I'm sure all who recieve them adore your beyond-excellent comments... ^^ It's really amazing you know...

Hehe...

*kisses with Darky-chan and Taeshilh stares* LOL XXXXP;;

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taeshilh In reply to MilesTailsPrower-007 [2004-03-25 20:04:09 +0000 UTC]

I hog attention? O.O I didn't know that.. deepest apologies if it looked like I was doing that and it bugged you *Waves arms, rapidly*
I always ramble endlessly to things-pyo. You've seen the comments I've made on your journal and stuff! xD I just.. ramble a lot ;.;

And my comments are nothing special xD!! Really! I actually surprise myself at times with how long some of my comments are o.o I guess it depends on the topic. I noticed that I blabber on even more with friends as well xD Maybe it's because I know I won't be pushed off a cliff for carrying on too long or something. *Kicked*

.. And once more, I am talking too much o.o Told yoooou xD I just hope it didn't make you feel bad ;.;! I didn't mean to at all.. I guess I'm just a weapon when it comes to a keyboard => 12-hour prating ahoy! *Hit*

But yesh xD!! And that's very cute! ;.; *Takes a picture of you both and puts it in the scrapbook* xD

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MilesTailsPrower-007 In reply to taeshilh [2004-03-25 23:08:56 +0000 UTC]

LOL.. you didn't upset me, I meant it in a joking manner ^_~ No worries. ^_^ We can ramble together XXXP

And yes, your comments are excellent, so live with it LOL

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taeshilh In reply to MilesTailsPrower-007 [2004-03-26 20:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Oops! Sorry for taking it seriously and getting all worried and paranoid, then xD My apologies!

.. Wow. I seriously apologize too much o.o Sorry about tha-- *Clubbed*

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krusher [2004-03-24 21:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Man, I missed commenting your cunning art works. ^_^

The page looks great to me. The first panels present a great amount of detail and smoothness in shading and the last panel seems flooded with sunlight whick, to me, looks cool and flows well with the action. ^_^

Gotta check the previous pages, I'm a little lost Keep up the excellent work, man!

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iSymmetryKid [2004-03-24 20:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Quote: Darkspeeds:

Eh..heh..heh.. Dude I don't have the chance to even download anything at home! LMAO! Darn... Sorry if all that time you been picking a song and trying to fit it in to the manga, I'm really sorry about this but nevertheless it's not as if I'm saying I never appreciate what you did. ^_^ It's awesome that you've managed to find a song that suits you. I'm sure I can listen to it with my heart too. ^_^

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Oh that's no problem dude. I understand so you can just look it over when ya get the chance....as for the comic, it's goin' great so far man, keep at it.

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tailsgurl [2004-03-24 20:10:17 +0000 UTC]

I wuv how you draw! You and MilesTailsPrower-007 both draw very good! I love ur art! Great comic! *Continues to play her Gameboy Advance * Yeah it is xd, not the face that's laughing ..... (just so you know)

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cheesefoxlee [2004-03-24 18:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Whaaaa!!!! I love this!!! You're Great!

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yamithehedgehog [2004-03-24 17:19:33 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, that is so sweet...Sonic wishing Tails well on his journey....*sniffle* Tails' goin' solo!!! x3 Awesome shading and anatomy, as always Darky-chan ^^ Can I call you that? Heheheh~

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BleedingJoker [2004-03-24 17:07:44 +0000 UTC]

great! Nice.

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Jim-Prower [2004-03-24 13:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Flippin' Awsome.....

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omegacomics [2004-03-24 13:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Cool Shadin! I like it a lto!

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quizmire [2004-03-24 13:16:22 +0000 UTC]

That's so sad, yet at the same time cute, great job Drakspeeds.......DON'Y YOU TAKE MY CHEEZE!!!!!!....ahem sorry.

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hypermegatailsfan [2004-03-24 12:18:56 +0000 UTC]

My meaningless stupid pathetic comments are being noticed by THE darkspeeds?!? *has a heart attack+stroke*

ok,now for commenting.If you ask me,the empty pages fit the story-there will a sort of emptiness for Tails's freinds once he leaves,and there shall be emptiness in his heart once he says 'goodbye'.Never the less,his freinds cheer him on.i almost wanna cry...

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SHF [2004-03-24 10:52:40 +0000 UTC]

WOW.. You really know which parts of the body to concentrate on when friend's says good bye na~ *coughthatsoundedweirdcough* Sonic's eyes in the first panel, Sonic's hand on the second last panel or was it the third last, whatever, really shows that Sonic is a really really really important friend to Tails.

*puts ear plugs in everyone's ears* Nevermind, no one's listening. Spoliers can spill now... urmm... ok. I'm listening... *puts ear plugs in own ear, allow some sound to enter* and now, you can say

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colinygtan [2004-03-24 09:17:09 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't repeat on how good the shading is ... ...Wow! good use of perspective in the last panel ...I'm probably wrong but Sonic and Tails seemed to be lack of shadow....or is it some kind of effect you are using...Anyway, Good Job...would love to see more "Tails Away" coming ... (Great job on the tree on the last panel...I really like the Bird's eye view effect........ and thanks for the dinner again , For those who don't know, Darkspeeds is not only a great artist, he is also a great cook too )

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Phantikid [2004-03-24 06:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Nee after a long time of no commenting X_X;;;;;

Aww, good luck Tails on your adventure of a lifetime! ^_^ (He's so lucky, I wanna go on one too! -_O;; )

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indilee [2004-03-24 05:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Awww.

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MilesTailsPrower-007 [2004-03-24 04:59:50 +0000 UTC]

*looks at the page for a long time*

I believe you intruiged me most with the second panel.... Part of Sonic... really doesn't wanna let go.... He just wants to stay with Tails and protect him like the sort of "big brother" figure he'd always been.... But as much as he feels the pain to let him go.. after all of their adventures.... after all they went through together... he still realizes Tails deserves to find an adventure of his own... maybe to find his own place... his own life... his own happiness... to feel what life is like and to truly be able to tell from his heart that life is worth living...

*actually is holding back tears IRL...*

*manages a smile* ....

Sonic's heart speaks now; "Take care Tails... I trust you to make the best choices for yourself now and take care of yourself... The days are gone where I had to take care of you..."



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.... and forget what you said about the inbalanced shading or whatever... there's no "inbalance" darling... only the passion and effort and heart you put into the lead on the paper....

That is talent....

I respect you so much...

My love... my teacher... my friend... my angel....

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darkmetallikarol [2004-03-24 04:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Your skillz are awsome. Specially shading skillz. And your sonic style rules. I also wonder where u get the time to write such biiiiiiiiiiiiiig descriptions O_O;;; anyway, its always great ^.^

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shadow-freak [2004-03-24 04:48:38 +0000 UTC]

I don't see what's so bad about the emptieness. O_____o
I think it fits this page well!!

And I also think that you used perspective to great use on the last panel too.

In a way, I think it does contrast. =/
Like how the first few panels are heavilly detialed and then on the bottom, more "spacy".

If it was me, I would be very satisfied with this page.

*Yeeee!!!! I'm second to comment!!! (I hope)
I'm normally one of the last to comment. *

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kati-kitani-st [2004-03-24 04:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Another awesomely portrayed page of your masterpiece comic, Elson! X3333 I'd say more, but I'm short on time right now. ;;;;

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RileyTheHedgehog [2004-03-24 04:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Good luck Tails! He's all grown up now. I wanna see more of what's to happen! LOL Great job Darkspeeds!

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mayshing [2004-03-24 04:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Your comic is getting more and more solid in shading, composition and layout. Nice job, keep it going.

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mayshing [2004-03-24 04:38:15 +0000 UTC]

woo woo, first to comment?

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