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Avitala [2009-01-08 03:46:45 +0000 UTC]
'Yes mam' XDDDDDD I read this a while ago, but never got around to commenting -.-' Its funny!
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MochiMaster [2008-08-02 03:55:15 +0000 UTC]
ha ha! love the story!
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VeroTheWolf [2008-04-24 13:59:19 +0000 UTC]
amazing picture and i loved thw story xD
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ninja1rocker [2008-04-07 01:21:28 +0000 UTC]
man this had to be hell inking it i envy you its so gooooood TT_TT
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BurningLJ [2007-05-25 17:58:50 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful, Darkspeeds! It makes me want to take up shading again. ^_^ *favs*
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Razelly [2007-04-10 02:48:09 +0000 UTC]
...thats alot of ouchies...
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angel-heart13 [2007-04-08 23:18:39 +0000 UTC]
Oooooo awesome! Ruby's keeping Ashworth in line! XD
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ShadOBabe [2007-04-01 22:06:45 +0000 UTC]
YEAH!!! HAHAHA!!!
GO RUBY!!!
This is going to be a fantasic story. ^^
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Blue-Sage [2007-03-31 20:16:05 +0000 UTC]
Wow... Ruby's quite... violent... *feels sorry for Ash and bruises*
To quote Mizuno no Okuni:
"You're blood-thirsty,impulsive, and don't take orders from nobody!"
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taeshilh [2007-03-29 15:44:33 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, I remember when you told me about this part of the story.. I'm happy to see how the environment where Ashworth resided in looks like now.. I always imagined it to look like.. old Mayan ruins instead of a crystal-ey pretty place XD It looks like gorgeous despite it holding a guy that can destroy the world.
My only qualm is with Ruby's eye.. it just doesn't look like it's in profile view.. the eye is kept a bit too back and there's just a huge blob of white around.. it almost looks as if the eye is meant to be a frontal-eye.. rather than profile. but that's the only real problem I see.. just practice a bit more with profile views.. I'm sure you'll improve! I have just as much trouble with profile views as well "XD;"
Usually with the facial structure.. it's a hard position to do sometimes.. but yeah. the eyeball shouldn't stick so straight.. I think it should be curving a bit with the position of the head.. but I don't know.. just keep practicing! And looking at guides.. I'm not really one for proportional advice since I just tend to draw what "looks" right or something "XD;" It's better to look up factoids.. I should do that.
The detail of the plague infront of Ashworth's resting place is detailed so fantastically.. seriously, that part turned out very well.
Hope to see more from your series!
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cynac [2007-03-26 09:34:18 +0000 UTC]
I love it. EVERYTHING. LOVE IT!
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Lightwind [2007-03-25 05:34:16 +0000 UTC]
Since I erased your deviantart from my bookmarks I haven't been visiting this place much... I'm missing a lot...
Ruby sounds like a typical Shonen female, hitting the main character... Some development on this perhaps?
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DariusDemonWings [2007-03-25 04:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Love the picture Elson Ruby's expression is beautiful in it!
I also really love the dialouge between the two of them as a writer I find that dialouge is the hardest thing to do in anythign like this and I thought the dialouge(and the actions in between it) were really great and very funny.
I really need to dust of my mic and see if I can come up with a little something using this! ^.^
-DariusDemonWings
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BloomBlitz [2007-03-24 01:19:26 +0000 UTC]
You are an excellent writer. I admire you.
That was beautiful. Such a wonderful opening into your series. It brings about many questions that us readers will hope to be able to answer someday.
Who else released Ash in the past? I'm quite curious.
Great work again Dark! Hope you're enjoying your vacation, and I hope to see you in NY (if I can get a ride).
*faves*
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Treah [2007-03-24 00:59:17 +0000 UTC]
Your drawings are awsoemas always!
and your story so far has got me pumped! i just GOTTA read more!
ya know why? beccause your story has something i havent seen in a good long while....PIZZAZZ!!!
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Sol-Guardian-Kilo [2007-03-23 21:32:39 +0000 UTC]
This is an awsome intro. I can't wait till you right some more! Oh,and nice pic,btw
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Zek-SikenX [2007-03-23 20:08:51 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait. This already seems awesome even though it's an intro!
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Fenix287 [2007-03-23 15:30:25 +0000 UTC]
HOLY CRUDMONKEYS!!!!! Dude! this is absolutly AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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FireFoxgirl [2007-03-23 13:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Interesting
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EvyCrystal [2007-03-23 13:20:20 +0000 UTC]
lol nice opening XD made me laugh XD really great job amigo ^^ keep up the great work XD
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piedodge [2007-03-23 13:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Holy cow! That's some story you got there mate *thumbs up*
keep it going!
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JalessiaJ [2007-03-23 13:11:46 +0000 UTC]
Nice one, Darkspeeds. Ash reminds me of Shadow a bit ^^.
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reyhan-spirit [2007-03-23 11:31:01 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story. But he is trapped. D=
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Annomaniac [2007-03-23 10:46:59 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... so that's how it started... Hm hm...
I have to say you're a good writer. So far, I've been more interested in the text then in the picture - but of course it's great, not just with Ruby in the foreground and this scenery with the smaragds ( ? ) and Ash in one of them up there, also with Rubys expression... her excitement and surprise ? But the text really is great, more infos about Ashworth... and the interaction between Ruby and Ash, lol. ^^ I like this girl. ^_^
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Archinos [2007-03-23 10:34:02 +0000 UTC]
There's an odd feeling that I'm clinging onto the story here through the description more than the image itself... is that a bad thing? e_e
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Lily-Hedgehog [2007-03-23 07:30:10 +0000 UTC]
lol that gotta hurt... but I wonder what's on Ashworth's mind....this is getting very interesting..
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Roareye [2007-03-23 07:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Them breasts need more definition XP
That is an amazing piece of artwork dude, really great :3 Keep it goin'.
Roareye Black.
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Valejandra-Fox [2007-03-23 06:48:46 +0000 UTC]
heehee Ashworth got owned by a girl xD
amazing shading, the scene is spectacular ^^b
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MysteryEzekude [2007-03-23 06:16:35 +0000 UTC]
I didn't think Ashworth was less-modern-like before he was released...!
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Helsaabi [2007-03-23 05:26:39 +0000 UTC]
x3
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