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--- Tails Away

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WHAT I HAVE TO SAY

Ack!! There are two things to notify to you all... X___X

1) On the previous page I had made several errors stating that the new member of the Sonic family is named Shift when in fact it was Swift!!! X_______X Gomenasai!!! X_X

Thank you to those who had pointed out my mistake and also to those who already knew it was Swift reading the manga page itself. ^_~

2) For those who don't know (I assume as one of them! LOL! XD ^__^) this manga is read from left to right, traditional Japanese style. ^_~

Okay now with the details of the page. ^___^

All in all I enjoyed drawing each panel because it's bursting with expression!!! XD X3 Panel 2 (top -right corner) doesn't show much but if your look closely I wrote some descriptions... *giggles* I've used method/technique to add more life to the page. ^______^ Ari~gato Taeshilh-chan!! XXX3

If you confused with what's happening on first few panels, Swift's Knuckle Strike has managed to erupt a little bit of the canyon nearby, forcing pebbles and small rocks to crumble from above... ^_^ This falling rock is the size of an egg so it would hurt if it is falling from a high altitude and high velocity! X3 *chuckles* ^_^ Poor Swift! ;_;

STORY TIME

Well Swift's weakness is his weakness! XXX3 He can't stand too strong of a blow... Basically he's rather fragile... *giggles* =x Who is going to save him froim his cry of pain! ;_; Tails finds it too shocking to handle! XD XD XD *SHOT!* Well not really, he's just horrified by how loud can be when he's in pain! X3 Awww...! ;.;

Swift has managed to learn such a devastating attack in just one day! Not bad for a little critter! XD XD XD ^_____^ Awesome for a first try but will this lead to something more dangerous later...? Find out in the next few pages of Tails Away! ^_______^

P.S.

Oh and just one more thing! O_O I felt sorry drawing Swift on panels 5 & 6 cuz of the pain he's trying to hold... Makes him look kinda weak doesn't it? ;;;; Well I didn't want to embarass him any further cuz I stopped drawing the last panel and took a short break drawing something else...

Take a look. ^_____^

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Kookai ne??? ^___^

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REPLIES

[NOT IN ORDER! GOMEN NE! XX3]

--- Fixed them up. ^_~ Thanks for notifying them to me! ^_~ I'm going to rad what you PM'ed to me in a moment! ^_~

--- Bro as always I'm honoured to hear your words because they always give me that 'boost' of courage and confidence to do more and better in my artwork... ^_~
In fact make that big bro... Yeah big bro... ^_^ *hugs big bro NKLS* ^___^

I haven't been to Soah CitY lately, I should pay a visit some time and catch up with my other friends and sibblings that are not here and hang around there instead... ^_^ Thanks for reminding me big bro... Keep up the good work as always. *salutes away NKLS*

--- Thanks for the useful advice and feedback jaggedice200! ^_^ I still reckon it was not too bad adding the gradient effect to portray the serousness of the page. There are lots of ways to portray the meaning of a page in the background and I think the gradient effect works nicely. ^_~

--- Thank you alwas for you compliments buddy. Shoot me now for not being able to comment on you awesome work... X_X I love the one you did of Aristos! ^_^ Awesome contrasting setch my freind! ^_~ So you're into cooking now? ^_~

--- Thank you so much James... *little bro hugs* ^___^ I always appreciate your feedback. ^_~ Hope to catch up with you and Victoria soon! Bye!! ^_____^

--- Thanks Feng ^_^ I hope to do a shading tutorial soon! Yeah I too feel that it's unatural to put in those music boxes, but it something new that I must try for making online fan-comics! ^____^

--- You know I 've written quite a long reply and now it's all gone... X_____X *sigh* Ah well thank oyu once again for commenting on my works.

Thank you for your suggestions, it's a great thing that you're advising me some tips to help improve my work and no you're not giving that impression to the guys here. Feel free to express buddy! ^___^

Tails in 'Blood' was not in a hurry to wash his face! XD XD XD I just addd the speed lines for effects. It doesn't mean that he was in a rush to do so. *giggles*

With the collision effects, I'm sure you'll master that technique soon enough...

So sorry if I had confused you on the names... it's definetly Swift... X_X I don't know how I got myself to using Shift... X_X I fixed them up already. ^_^ Though I still made an error on the sketch of him at 18 years of age... Which I'm going to fix right now! XD ^_~

--- You really think so? Wai! ^______^ Yeah I do like to jerk people out oftheir thoughts shadowgirl669 and it's becoming a habit! XD XD XD

There'll be plenty of those inShadow: Road to Light.

--- Yeah ain't he cyuuute! =3 XD ^____^ Oh you mean you were laughing at the second-last panel? This manga reads from left to right! ^___^

--- Thanks for keeping a 'folllow up' on my works and assuring that things are going uder control... ^_ *hugs hedgie-girl ^__^* I still haven't read my journal yet but I'm sure I've seen you post something there! ^___^

Ari~gato gosiamushu! *bows* ^_^

Yeah poor Tails, that wrench must've hurt him badly... X_X Yeah I hope so too... He'll find his parents one day.. He will...

*giggles* Poor Swift! XD ^_^ There are similarities with Tails in the present and what happened in the past with him and Swift ne?

I'm glad you liked the speed effects. ^___^ Hope to add some more action scenes in future pages to hasten the pace. ^_~

You enjoyed the music? ^_^ Wow... I wonder how you mean by "The music kinda brought a tear to my eye since it reminded me of things"... ^_^ *hugs back* ^_~

--- Cheers mate. Hope you found your tape... *shot!* XD ^_^

--- (ACK! XD Will update this soon! ;; )

--- Thank you so much bro... I'll be waiting for your stuff on MAX PAYNE by e-mail. ^_~ Take your time little bro and keep up the fantastic stuff on DA! ^______^

--- =3 :3 *huggles little sis' Taiora-chan ^______^ Hope you're feeling better now after what's happenned... .. ^_^

--- Yeah poor Tails... Yeah sure! Go and give him a hug! ^___^ He'll love it! XD ^_____^ *Tails is hugged by kslrmine X3 Tails blushes XXX3*

--- (ACK! XD Will update this soon! ;; )

--- (ACK! XD Will update this soon! ;; )

:iconKinichan : ---*huggles aplenty* Awww... ^____^ Well here's another page... I hope you like it... *blushes* ; ^_~ Have a giggle here and there with this one! ^_____^ Swift looks so kawaii ne? *is still huging his little sis' Kinichan... ^_^*

--- Ack! O_X You already faved one of my works that I was going to delete! X___X Gomenasai!!!! X_____X I was only testing it out little bro... ^_^;; The pic's here anyway, it's not worth to be a deviation... *chuckles* XD ^_~

[link]

Thank you so much for keeping with my artworks bro... I'm ever always in admiration of you... *hugs little bro Zephyr-kun ^_^* Catch you later bro, it's getting hot here... the climate is almost above the summer condition at 40 degrees celcius... X_X XD XD XD Better thrun on the air conditioning... No wait I gotta go to work! O_O Ack! XD See ya later Marcelo! ^___^ Take care...!

Description
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PAGE DETAILS

[Comic/Manga]

--- Tails Away

[Previous Page]

KNUCKLE STRIKE!!! - Page 10

[link]

[Current Page]

Swift's Weakness - Page 11

[Next Page]

Father and Son - Page 12

[link]

====================================

WHAT I HAVE TO SAY

Ack!! There are two things to notify to you all... X___X

1) On the previous page I had made several errors stating that the new member of the Sonic family is named Shift when in fact it was Swift!!! X_______X Gomenasai!!! X_X

Thank you to those who had pointed out my mistake and also to those who already knew it was Swift reading the manga page itself. ^_~

2) For those who don't know (I assume as one of them! LOL! XD ^__^) this manga is read from left to right, traditional Japanese style. ^_~

Okay now with the details of the page. ^___^

All in all I enjoyed drawing each panel because it's bursting with expression!!! XD X3 Panel 2 (top -right corner) doesn't show much but if your look closely I wrote some descriptions... *giggles* I've used method/technique to add more life to the page. ^______^ Ari~gato Taeshilh-chan!! XXX3

If you confused with what's happening on first few panels, Swift's Knuckle Strike has managed to erupt a little bit of the canyon nearby, forcing pebbles and small rocks to crumble from above... ^_^ This falling rock is the size of an egg so it would hurt if it is falling from a high altitude and high velocity! X3 *chuckles* ^_^ Poor Swift! ;_;

STORY TIME

Well Swift's weakness is his weakness! XXX3 He can't stand too strong of a blow... Basically he's rather fragile... *giggles* =x Who is going to save him froim his cry of pain! ;_; Tails finds it too shocking to handle! XD XD XD *SHOT!* Well not really, he's just horrified by how loud can be when he's in pain! X3 Awww...! ;.;

Swift has managed to learn such a devastating attack in just one day! Not bad for a little critter! XD XD XD ^_____^ Awesome for a first try but will this lead to something more dangerous later...? Find out in the next few pages of Tails Away! ^_______^

P.S.

Oh and just one more thing! O_O I felt sorry drawing Swift on panels 5 & 6 cuz of the pain he's trying to hold... Makes him look kinda weak doesn't it? ;;;; Well I didn't want to embarass him any further cuz I stopped drawing the last panel and took a short break drawing something else...

Take a look. ^_____^

[link]

Kookai ne??? ^___^

====================================

REPLIES

[NOT IN ORDER! GOMEN NE! XX3]

--- Fixed them up. ^_~ Thanks for notifying them to me! ^_~ I'm going to rad what you PM'ed to me in a moment! ^_~

--- Bro as always I'm honoured to hear your words because they always give me that 'boost' of courage and confidence to do more and better in my artwork... ^_~
In fact make that big bro... Yeah big bro... ^_^ *hugs big bro NKLS* ^___^

I haven't been to Soah CitY lately, I should pay a visit some time and catch up with my other friends and sibblings that are not here and hang around there instead... ^_^ Thanks for reminding me big bro... Keep up the good work as always. *salutes away NKLS*

--- Thanks for the useful advice and feedback jaggedice200! ^_^ I still reckon it was not too bad adding the gradient effect to portray the serousness of the page. There are lots of ways to portray the meaning of a page in the background and I think the gradient effect works nicely. ^_~

--- Thank you alwas for you compliments buddy. Shoot me now for not being able to comment on you awesome work... X_X I love the one you did of Aristos! ^_^ Awesome contrasting setch my freind! ^_~ So you're into cooking now? ^_~

--- Thank you so much James... *little bro hugs* ^___^ I always appreciate your feedback. ^_~ Hope to catch up with you and Victoria soon! Bye!! ^_____^

--- Thanks Feng ^_^ I hope to do a shading tutorial soon! Yeah I too feel that it's unatural to put in those music boxes, but it something new that I must try for making online fan-comics! ^____^

--- You know I 've written quite a long reply and now it's all gone... X_____X *sigh* Ah well thank oyu once again for commenting on my works.

Thank you for your suggestions, it's a great thing that you're advising me some tips to help improve my work and no you're not giving that impression to the guys here. Feel free to express buddy! ^___^

Tails in 'Blood' was not in a hurry to wash his face! XD XD XD I just addd the speed lines for effects. It doesn't mean that he was in a rush to do so. *giggles*

With the collision effects, I'm sure you'll master that technique soon enough...

So sorry if I had confused you on the names... it's definetly Swift... X_X I don't know how I got myself to using Shift... X_X I fixed them up already. ^_^ Though I still made an error on the sketch of him at 18 years of age... Which I'm going to fix right now! XD ^_~

--- You really think so? Wai! ^______^ Yeah I do like to jerk people out oftheir thoughts shadowgirl669 and it's becoming a habit! XD XD XD

There'll be plenty of those inShadow: Road to Light.

--- Yeah ain't he cyuuute! =3 XD ^____^ Oh you mean you were laughing at the second-last panel? This manga reads from left to right! ^___^

--- Thanks for keeping a 'folllow up' on my works and assuring that things are going uder control... ^_ *hugs hedgie-girl ^__^* I still haven't read my journal yet but I'm sure I've seen you post something there! ^___^

Ari~gato gosiamushu! *bows* ^_^

Yeah poor Tails, that wrench must've hurt him badly... X_X Yeah I hope so too... He'll find his parents one day.. He will...

*giggles* Poor Swift! XD ^_^ There are similarities with Tails in the present and what happened in the past with him and Swift ne?

I'm glad you liked the speed effects. ^___^ Hope to add some more action scenes in future pages to hasten the pace. ^_~

You enjoyed the music? ^_^ Wow... I wonder how you mean by "The music kinda brought a tear to my eye since it reminded me of things"... ^_^ *hugs back* ^_~

--- Cheers mate. Hope you found your tape... *shot!* XD ^_^

--- (ACK! XD Will update this soon! ;; )

--- Thank you so much bro... I'll be waiting for your stuff on MAX PAYNE by e-mail. ^_~ Take your time little bro and keep up the fantastic stuff on DA! ^______^

--- =3 :3 *huggles little sis' Taiora-chan ^______^ Hope you're feeling better now after what's happenned... .. ^_^

--- Yeah poor Tails... Yeah sure! Go and give him a hug! ^___^ He'll love it! XD ^_____^ *Tails is hugged by kslrmine X3 Tails blushes XXX3*

--- (ACK! XD Will update this soon! ;; )

--- (ACK! XD Will update this soon! ;; )

:iconKinichan : ---*huggles aplenty* Awww... ^____^ Well here's another page... I hope you like it... *blushes* ; ^_~ Have a giggle here and there with this one! ^_____^ Swift looks so kawaii ne? *is still huging his little sis' Kinichan... ^_^*

--- Ack! O_X You already faved one of my works that I was going to delete! X___X Gomenasai!!!! X_____X I was only testing it out little bro... ^_^;; The pic's here anyway, it's not worth to be a deviation... *chuckles* XD ^_~

[link]

Thank you so much for keeping with my artworks bro... I'm ever always in admiration of you... *hugs little bro Zephyr-kun ^_^* Catch you later bro, it's getting hot here... the climate is almost above the summer condition at 40 degrees celcius... X_X XD XD XD Better thrun on the air conditioning... No wait I gotta go to work! O_O Ack! XD See ya later Marcelo! ^___^ Take care...!